$225 design --- "Page Quality" tool --- ends Tuesday, August 7

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  1. gatlind23

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    #21
    Okay, I made the edits like you asked. If you still want any edits made tell me! Hope you like it!

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  2. veckd

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    #22
    Updates:
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  3. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #23
    1st entry...


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  4. EducationLinks

    EducationLinks Well-Known Member

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    #24
    Ariestoteles, can you please post a full-size version? If nto possible for whatever reason, can you post a link to the full-size version?

    I will now begin typing feedback for the newst submissions. Some great stuff here, folks!

    P.S.: I love how you guys included a sample score as part of your submission!
     
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  5. Nick252

    Nick252 Well-Known Member

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    #25
    my designs

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  6. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #26

    Yes, uploading real size now...
    small sizes version for fast loading preview
     
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  7. EducationLinks

    EducationLinks Well-Known Member

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    #27
    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showpost.php?p=4013562&postcount=20

    demonhale, excellent job. I love the creativity that you employed by combining a check mark with the "Q." That is exactly the type of creative idea that I need to visually communicating page "quality."

    I also like how you colorized the background outside of the 850px-wide area of the actual page.


    I request these edits:

    1. "Optimize," not "Optimized"

    2. Put an exclamation point after "Engines".

    3. Put a border on the entire page (same color of blue).

    Thank you
     
    EducationLinks, Aug 5, 2007 IP
  8. gatlind23

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    #28
    So is demonhale the winner?
     
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  9. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #29
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  10. EducationLinks

    EducationLinks Well-Known Member

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    #30
    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showpost.php?p=4015715&postcount=21

    gatlind23, I request these edits:

    1. Don't cut-off "PQ" in the logo icon.

    2. Make "PageQuality" a little smaller, and the sub-text a little bigger.

    3. Don't cut-off the top and bottom borders.

    4. Switch the placement of "Not a member yet?" and the PayPal button.

    Thank you
     
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  11. EducationLinks

    EducationLinks Well-Known Member

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    #31
    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showpost.php?p=4016054&postcount=22

    veckd, I request these edits:

    1. I'm not crazy about that particular trophy. It's too bland. I'd also like to see a more creative way of incorporating a different trophy, rather than just putting it to the side.

    2. The ".org" extension is still missing.

    3. Make the sub-text a little bigger.

    4. Change "Not a member?" to "Not a member yet?"

    5. Switch the placement of "Not a member yet?" and the PayPal button.

    Thank you


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    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showpost.php?p=4020051&postcount=25

    Nick252, very nice. I think I prefer the rounded version.

    I'd like to see these edits:

    1. Keep the PayPal button the same size, but make it clear.

    2. Change "Suscribe now" to "Subscribe Now".

    3. Don't cut-off the subscribe box.

    Thank you
     
    EducationLinks, Aug 5, 2007 IP
  12. Design4u

    Design4u Banned

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    #32
    Is the contest open for new entry...

    Will make my entry soon!
     
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  13. EducationLinks

    EducationLinks Well-Known Member

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    #33
    Yes, the contest is still open. I will take new submissions up to the last minute. As long as I receive a 1st entry before the new deadline (see below), I will still provide feedback and accept edits.

    The contest was scheduled to end on Tuesday, August 7 at 8:00 PM, PST. However, I will now extend the entry deadline to Wednesday, August 8 at 8:00 PM, PST because the site was down for a while due to its dedicated IP propogating.
     
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  14. EducationLinks

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    #34
    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showpost.php?p=4020493&postcount=29

    Ariestoteles, I really like what you have done. It's clean and brandable.

    I'd like to see these edits:

    1. Make the "PQ" image a little more clear. (Right now, it's not immediately obvious that the orange part is a "Q".) Try using the same font (or similar) that you used for the big domain name.

    2. Remove the white border on the actual letters in the "PQ" image.

    3. Can you make the background of the "PQ" image an LCD monitor with only your "PQ" symbol in a full-screen browser window? (I thought about asking you for JUST a browser window, but I don't know if you could make it clear enough, considering that it will be fairly small. If you can, go for it!) I'm sure that you can do better than the following LCD/browser example, but it's important that the browser window is obvious:

    http://www.istockphoto.com/file_clo...rs/1069713_flat_screen_monitor.php?id=1069713


    4. Make the log-in/PayPal "tube" just a tad darker so that the white fonts stand out a little better.

    Thank you
     
    EducationLinks, Aug 6, 2007 IP
  15. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #35
    Thanks EL.. working on editing now...
     
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  16. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #36
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  17. Nick252

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    #37
    i made the changes

    let me know if you want to change something else

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  18. Design4u

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    #38
    Hello,

    Here is my entry...Any changes then please let me know...Feedback please.

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  19. veckd

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    #39
    Revisions made:
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    I brought in a totally new logo idea, i like this a lot. Feedback appriciated.
    Oops i forgot to add "yet" i'll do that in my next revision. sorry for that =/
     
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  20. EducationLinks

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    #40
    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showpost.php?p=4025745&postcount=36

    Ariestoteles, please do these edits:

    1. Make the "PQ" letters on the monitor screen 20% smaller. Then make the "Q" the same color orange as the ".org".

    2. Add an exclamation point after "Engines".

    3. Put back the near-translucent "tube" the previously encased the area of the login inputs and PayPal button. I really liked that part; I just wanted it slightly darker. I'd also like you to replace the original background shades and placement.

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    4. Put a small, black trademark symbol to the upper-right of the orange ".org".

    Thank you
     
    EducationLinks, Aug 6, 2007 IP