Review My Landing Page Please

I have a landing page I just created for a certain niche. The links from the landing page go to 2 different offers in the same niche.

It is my first real attempt at a landing page and I did it on my own so I know it's horrible because I suck at designing anything, much less a lean mean conversion machine

So if any experienced top earner affiliates here (who know about ringtones ) would do me a square and have a look at it and tell me what you think I'd be extremely grateful.

I fully understand your time is valuable to you so you of course don't have to give me a full all out review of my landing page if you don't want to.

Perhaps just tell me what you think?

Post here or PM me and I'll send you the URL

 

I'll give it a look over

 

I'll check it out George. PM me the link.

 

id like to check it out

 

PM me the link

 

I can give it a look.

 

pm me the link

 

I check it out

 

George I would love to steal err i mean see it!

 

let me steal the look as well.

 

Sure send me a PM too.

 

Design ... is important part to convert your click to action.
let me see your URL, plz PM me.

 

Gimme a peak.

 

New here, but I've designed a few landing pages. I'll take a look if you PM me the link.

 

Shoe, I can't send you PMs or even emails from here

 

send me the link too please

 

Seems like a lot of people are needing new landing page ideas

 

Well, if people here are so sceptical and untrusting, there's no point in me offering my help.
It just ain't worth my time.

 

i'll take a look if you want.

 

I don't see anyone flaming you, what's got you upset?