Please review my Computer Software Store !

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  1. #1
    SoftMrm.com is an Online Computer Store Soft.
    Feel free to buy any software you want from there, if you need one , or feel free to add an review to one of our software or download one of the trial versions. .

    Link : Computer Software and Reviews

    Any feedback is important to me to improve that !
    Please review it, and make any suggestions and critiques !

    Thank You in advance.
    Best regards.
    Robert M.
     
    bilzone, Jul 9, 2007 IP
  2. nabil_kadimi

    nabil_kadimi Well-Known Member

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    Nice website
    -I like the blue but not the orange...
    -Nice logo but what does Mrm means?
    -Oh, visitors are not interested in knowing your PR, they may not even know what it means, and the link to prchecker.info is a good way to loose your PR!!!
    -There are 2 snapshots appearing whene I mouseover an image!!
    -The images should be resampled, think of users with low connection speeds, take a look here
     
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  3. razsports

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    bilzone,

    Positives: 1. Loved the color your website, 2.loved the graphics and 3. looked professional.

    The negatives: 1. Too cluttered- the home page seemed very busy.

    You also need to break down each page into one or two keyword phrases.
    This would help improve your SEO.
     
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  4. bilzone

    bilzone Peon

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    nabil_kadimi

    Thx for your oppinions !
    - MRM are initials from my name. ;)
    - Removed the link to prchecker.info.
    - Removed one of the snapshots.
    - I know is not verry fast but soon i will remediate it, thx for observation.

    razsports
    Thx for your positive feedbacks. ;)
    But i don`t understand you mean about that :

    "You also need to break down each page into one or two keyword phrases.
    This would help improve your SEO." .


    Can you explain what you mean and if you want to advice me with other few things about SEO to improve my website.

    Thx again and waiting your feedbacks !
    Best regards.
     
    bilzone, Jul 9, 2007 IP
  5. mgrohan

    mgrohan Active Member

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    Great website design. Very professional and suits perfectly with what you are doing.

    Only thing i don't like is the black borders for the headings, is a bit too strong. They take away a bit of the attention from the content, as the eyes are drawn to them.
     
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  6. Marty_

    Marty_ Banned

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    Yes very nice and very good, easy to find lay out.
     
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    Dzuster Banned

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    #7
    Nice Site..
    I like the combination of blue and orange..
    but i dont like the red text..the text is quite hard to read..
     
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    theo-zzzz Notable Member

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    Hi, first thing that struck me when I went to your site was that it doesn't seem like a store at all.

    You should have product images, with maybe prices - perhaps you can carve out a section on your sidebar somewhere. You should redesign the layout of the whole page. Lost that big google ad, it's taking up precious space that you need to promote your products. Look at how other popular stores on the net do it, like Newegg.com and try and emulate them. Good luck!
     
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  10. bilzone

    bilzone Peon

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    mgrohan

    Thx for your positive feedbacks and about the black borders for the headings i think it intergrate it in design but i will try other combinations to see if are ok..

    Marty_

    Thx for your positive feedbacks.

    Dzuster

    Thx for your positive feedbacks.
    About the red text i will try to change with other colors. Thx


    theo-zzzz


    What you mean with "http://news.softmrm.com/it-services/...earch-engines/
    It's very hard to read, and you will get a duplicate content penalty." ??

    It about font size orh what ? And tell me about duplicate content....where u see duplicate content ??

    Sorry for my english, i now is not verry good.

    Thx again and waiting your feedbacks !
    Best regards.
     
    bilzone, Jul 10, 2007 IP
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    theo-zzzz Notable Member

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    #11
    It's not the font size, it's the color.

    You have copied entire news articles, and that's duplicate content.

    Here's an example:
    http://news.softmrm.com/it-services/retail-sites-get-25-of-traffic-from-search-engines/
    copied from:
    http://www.itnews.com.au/newsstory.aspx?CIaNID=53744&r=hstory

    And you are violating copyright:
     
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  12. kumarg

    kumarg Active Member

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    #12
    ur site is good
    its total collection.
     
    kumarg, Jul 10, 2007 IP
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    Nice! I'll def. have to look through all your items and see if I see anything I'd want ;)
     
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  14. bilzone

    bilzone Peon

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    Thx all for your oppinions.
    Still waiting your suggestion to improve my website.
    What to add to look more profesional ?
    Thx
     
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    #15
    I like your design, it looks very proffesional...
    But yes it looks a little busy
     
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  16. bilzone

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    Little busy !??
    Tell me what can i remove from this to make it more free...

    Thx.
     
    bilzone, Jul 11, 2007 IP
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    #17
    remove those things that is blocking the user attention to your prime focus, so ask yourself on this.
     
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  18. bilzone

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    OK, i will see what can i remove to make it more free...
     
    bilzone, Jul 12, 2007 IP