REVIEW my CB affiliate sales page!

Hi All,

I figured this a good place for existing click bank affiliates AND newbies to post links to their sales pages for review.

If you don't want to post your sales page, feel free to offer reviews of those which are posted.

I'll start http://clickbank.2freedom.com

 

There is not even a single outgoing link on this page.
so, where will visitors go after coming to your page?
( Do you find the samething? or is there something wrong with my browser? )

 

The colors kill my eyes. The sale page has to be made more professional. You won't be getting much orders with that type of quality of a sales page.

 

Dude that's awful.

I'll seriously give you a free copy of my wordpress theme based on usability if you promise me you'll change that page.

PM me if you want it.

 

why do i get the feeling you guys confused the "affiliate page" with the actually "landing page"

lol

 

ClickBanker,

Is that even your web site, do you own the domain "quantitativefinancemasters.com"?

2Freedom.com is a URL shortening service, Why would you use it if the above Domain is yours? If it's yours, wouldn't it make more sense to link to it directly? Also, why wouldn't you use the same template for your affiliates page as your home page? It looks ten times better.

Regards...

 

The bright colors against a white background is real hard on the eyes. Way too much white as it is.

 

Did you make it in Microsoft Word 97? I suppose the presentation doesn't matter as much because it's an affiliate page. However, affiliates may think it looks unprofessional and will not bother trying to sell your product. As you can see from the replies, some affiliate sellers aren't too impressed.

In my opinion it looks spammy, sorry.

 

Whoever this sales page belongs to deserve a hard kick.

Seriously, who uses Powerpoint templates for a sales page!? My grandmother could do better, and then again she doesn't even know to switch on a computer!

Sometimes, simple is better. Standardize the text, bold/highlight the important words, add some graphics, bullets, and presto. Jeez... the quality of this makes you wonder if he's gunning for the Worse Salespage 2007 Award.

 

I'm putting in good money that it was made with Microsoft Word.

 

Yea dude, that site is really hard on the eyes and doesn't make me want to buy at all!

Check out what these guys did:

http://www.netfrontiermarketing.com/dayjobkiller.html

This is how a profit pulling affiliate landing page SHOULD look...

 

It certainly was. Just look at the page source

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<meta name=Generator content="Microsoft Word 10">
<meta name=Originator content="Microsoft Word 10">
...

HTML:

I think it looks good in a 1990's sort of way

 

This has got to be the worst website I have ever seen, no offense.

 

Its bad, no offence. No one in thier right mind would buy something from that landing page.

 

Bad design, of course - but I think i saw on some other forum that the guy owning the site said this was intentional, and it works.
Saw that some time ago, so not sure - but I AM sure it was about this site: this is definitely NOT a design i would forget.
If this is what they want - they succeeded big time. But if what they want is affiliates and clients - they really should change!

 

Yeah, that DJK review is indeed one heck of a sales letter.

It has so many hooks and subtle nuances, not to mention call-to actions and the 'in-your-face' phrases. Works like a charm.

But Microsoft Word with ugly ass fonts and terrible language... It'll only make impressions (bad ones at that), not sales....