Review my website please?!

Hello

I was wondering if people could have a look at my site
http://www.make-money-online-too.com and give me a little bit of constructive critisism?

I'm open to any suggestions and as it is a relatively new site it isn't quite finished but hopefull you should get the jist of what i'm trying to do!!

Thanks!

 

apply some css to the links, blue links on white background don't look good
at least reduce the darkness. and keep some spacing between different parts on the homepage so that they are easy to read

 

not bad either.good work.I think background color is not too good.

 

font is a little too big, get a professional designer to do your layout!

 

I think you must use some content above the fold to attract the users and below the fold sell books or on another page.
Also I don't know why you choose to put the free book about seo.
I understand that is free but what other motivation do you have to put the book?
The keyword make money online is very competitive word so you have alot of work to do to persuade people to buy your books.
Also you have to ask yourself if you see this site you will buy the books ?, at this momet I will not.Maybe you will atract some kids,teens, but you need buyers , adult persons.

What your site have and others sites don't have?Also testimonials are good marketing tactic to use.

 

Hi,

I think the site design theme can be enhanced a lot more further.. If you are interested kindly let me know.

Thanks

Sweety

 

it was as sale letter. if you use red instead of black i think will be better than it

 

I think it's a little too cluttered. Too much text.

 

Good ad placement. As for the content, it seems unprofessionally written. When your offering services to make a website you definately need to make sure your site looks good because it directly relates to the quality of sites you will make for them. The contact doesnt work Btw.

I hope it helps you some!

Best of luck!

 

if you're looking for creative input, try the design forum and look around for a web 2.0 logo designer. you can match this with a potential css layout.

try lowering the font size 1 notch, that will make the site a whole lot easier to read with the current font.

You're articles could use navigation to other articles as well.

 

Thank you so much for all your input!!

I'm quite confident in the coding of a website it's just the design aspect I struggle with and I needed some more eyes to see it differently! Thanks!

Will get to work and ask for more reviews once it's updated!
Again thanks!

 

The SEO book has a clickbank ID imbedded in it. And giving something away for free is easier than selling something!! LOL!