Please review my site.

Please review my site. I could use some tips or constructive criticism. Thanks

http://www.jamfestexpress.com/

I know all the states are not completed... still working on that.

forums are here:

http://www.jamfestexpress.com/forums

 

it is one nice website. you should to add other pages. you rember that the content is the king of success.
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I do like your site and considering the forums, unless they were paid posters, so do others.BUT....
-The white text at the top on blue is really hard to read.
-You would make better earnings from adsense on the sides instead of firefox and amazon
- Try to utilise all the space on your main site

 

Honestly i dont really like the background texture and the cloud background...you'd be better off using a plain color or at least a gradient blend.. Too much text and high texture background complicates things

 

Thanks for all the tips.

 

This site is nice, but I think that the menu should be bigger. good luck!

 

Are you talking about the 'links' menu at the top or the 'states' drop down menu?

 

I dont really like that lightning bolt thing at the top... x.x

 

Quite interesting but definately more content, maybe a smarter banner.

 

Yeah, it looks nice, just need more content.

 

Any suggestions on what kind of content I could add?

 

I think you should ad a page about the Michigan Football Team (just kidding, I'm from MI)
If you are going to tackle this subject matter you would be remiss if you did not have a tribute, BIO page about the Greatful Dead, and the hippie movement in San Francisco in the 60's.

And IMO, if you were going to monetize it, you could sell Hooka Pipes and accessories for days!
JMO

 

Didn't Tommy Chong go to jail for selling hookahs on the internet!?

 

I added more content. What do you think of this page?

http://www.jamfestexpress.com/jambands.htm

I'll be adding more bands too.

 

a nice website
i like your site

 

Thank-you.