$50 for Header/Logo

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by fizzleboink, Jun 10, 2007.

  1. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #21
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  2. fizzleboink

    fizzleboink Well-Known Member

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    #22
    I like it. Could you trim the height down a little? The right side is a bit bland, could you put some clipart or photos there too?
     
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  3. fizzleboink

    fizzleboink Well-Known Member

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    #23
    I like the dudes at the right, and some parts of the logo. However, I am not a fan of the "Team Wealth Builder" text at all. The border is too thick and the colors don't work.
     
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  4. fizzleboink

    fizzleboink Well-Known Member

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    #24
    Awesome improvements, good stuff. My only gripe is the color doesn't do it for me yet. You're using a color that isn't used anywhere else on the site. It's closer than before, but still off.
     
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  5. onixz100

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    #25
    Okay, I will edit it one more time to try and get the colors right. It's quite hard because I only have several tools to work with! :) I'll get it to that grayish , navy blue.
     
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  6. onixz100

    onixz100 Peon

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    #26
    Here is another rendition. This time I actually stole the color away with the ink sucking tool :O. So it has to be right T_T. As you can see in the picture, I think the color works extremely well with the colors a bit down south of it :O.

    - I also edited the glow around the LETS GET RICH. Rather than a hard edge gradient, I made a soft gradient around it as if it's glowing with a heavenly touch.

    [​IMG]
     
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  7. fizzleboink

    fizzleboink Well-Known Member

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    #27
    Cool. Umm one more thing. :D

    Could you make the word "Wealth" the same orange used on the site?
     
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  8. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #28
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    :)
     
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  9. fizzleboink

    fizzleboink Well-Known Member

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    #29
    Good try. The black text on the logo is too dark and doesn't have enough contrast with the background. I like the text otherwise.

    The background is a little too plain for me too, try and make it busier.
     
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  10. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #30
    Thanks, working on touch up now.. :)
     
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  11. Speno

    Speno Peon

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    #31
    Re-done my version with a bit of colour and a filler picture, feedback please
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  12. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #32
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    :)
     
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  13. fizzleboink

    fizzleboink Well-Known Member

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    #33
    Sorry but I don't like this one at all. Please try again if you want.
     
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  14. fizzleboink

    fizzleboink Well-Known Member

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    #34
    I prefer the second one.

    I really like the left side of it, I think the flag and stuff is great! But now the guys on the right don't really fit in anymore. :(

    Maybe it should stick to just a cartoonish feel. Mixing the cartoons with the real people doesn't mix well.

    Good improvement on the contrast with the "Team Builder" text, but it needs a bit more. The "Let's Get Rich Together!" text needs to drop the exclamation mark, and the text overall is too plain.
     
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  15. Ariestoteles

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    #35
    thanks for feedback, will be back with edited version... :)
     
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  16. james1988

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    #36
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  17. onixz100

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    #37
    Here is my newest rendition:

    Changes:

    - Changed color to matching orange color
    - Added a cute glow around the words that make them stand out more.

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  18. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #38
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  19. fizzleboink

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    #39
    Man it's close between onixz and Aries. I'm undecided at this point.

    Aries I like 2 better. I'm not sure what you could do to make it better, but if you think of something feel free to try.

    onixz could you do something to make the background more exciting? It's a bit drab (assuming the text there is a watermark).

    James, the white bg is too bright for the forum. It's "Let's Get Rich Together", and the "Team Wealth Builder" logo is too plain.

    Good progress guys.
     
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  20. onixz100

    onixz100 Peon

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    #40
    Actually, the text in the back is not a watermark that I put over to protect the work, its more of just a nice swiggly design to make it less boring.

    However, I will be about adding stuff right now :).
     
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