Review my updated credit website

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    shahab6, Jun 3, 2007 IP
  2. Jems0001

    Jems0001 Banned

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    hey good work shahab6.
     
    Jems0001, Jun 3, 2007 IP
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    hey shaba6!
    The site looks nice, but you should improve the quality of the logo!
    That's all from me
     
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    #4
    Looks just fine. How do you plan on generating traffic?
     
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    I like the background design, it looks quite fresh. For your site name, I would use a glossy web 2.0 styled font to match it.. using a sky blue instead of red. Also adding in some green colors to suit your blue/white/green colorscheme.
     
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    Hey shahab6!

    Just a few quick thoughts:

    • As someone mentioned earlier, you should try to improve the logo. I don't know how to describe it, but the edges of the text in your logo have 'noise'.
    • I would put a bigger space between the left navigational menu and the main content on the right.
    • The light blue links in the navigational menu are quite hard to read. Perhaps this is partly because of my old monitor but you should consider making a greater contrast.
    • I don't know what it is, but it feels like there is something missing on your layout. Perhaps you should use a slight gradient for the background or incorporate more web 2.0 style elements.

    My greatest concern however is that your design is based on a table. Use CSS. The benefits are huge!

    Hope this helps,
    Alex
     
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  7. shahab6

    shahab6 Well-Known Member

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    What do u mean that the edge has noise?
     
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  8. shahab6

    shahab6 Well-Known Member

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    Well right now traffic is mostly from SEO, PPC, Links, and Directories
     
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  9. shahab6

    shahab6 Well-Known Member

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    So you think I should remove the logo, or just keep it as it is, as this is the only logo I can put on, as of now. Or it doesn't matter.

    this is without logo
    http://www.creditcardschose.com
     
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    Nice looking site, the only thing I could find that you could improve is by removing the large gap at the bottom.
     
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    The logo puts down the site as the site layout looks good. The logo looks cheap and the quality is not that good. It has artifacts around the edges. You should also design the site in CSS and not tables as mentioned before. Some padding around the boxes and between the left navigation and the main content area.
     
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    Looks nice, Shahab6 -
    I would look at a new logo but the site looks very good.
     
    cckid, Jun 4, 2007 IP
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    I mean that the edges of the text appear to be a little bit fuzzy. They aren't sharp and clear. Sorry if I'm not able to explain myself properly. Maybe someone else can.
     
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  14. shahab6

    shahab6 Well-Known Member

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    So , should I take out the logo, as I have no other logos?
    This is how it looks like with out logo creditcardschose.com

    So, which one should I keep, the one with logo or without
     
    shahab6, Jun 4, 2007 IP
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    Hi
    Yout site looks great ! should receive good traffic soon.
     
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    Ok, I just changed the logo, how is the logo now.
     
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    I think it's a step in the right direction. I would have chosen a different font and made the text thicker (bolder).

    The text isn't fuzzy anymore which is good.

    EDIT: I deleted some stuff as I got confused by the post. Sorry
     
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  18. shenku

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    nice site, credit cards are always a good way to go :p
     
    shenku, Jun 5, 2007 IP