Free iPhone Site Review please :)

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Daz, May 21, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hey guys,
    Well, long story short:
    I had this site a long time ago, forgot about it, recently found out its on page 1 of google / yahoo for the term Free iPhone.

    Anyways, I'd love to see what you guys think.
    I've made everything big and easy to see. I love the graphics I had made and had the entire site scheme made this way.

    Whats different about this? Whats the difference between this and the base script?

    One thing I HATE about "FREE" stuff sites is the fact that they NEVER, NEVER, NEVER are FREE.
    I mean you sign up, get the referrals, and need to pay to complete some not free offers.
    So instead we changed the entire system.
    This is the only time I have ever had these changes done to this script. Ive never seen it done before.

    When people sign up, they can either do the normal paid "free" offers, and are out of $5 before they get their prize..
    OR
    They can choose to fill out 15 free offers!
    Sure this will take them a bit, but if they fill out 15 free offers, they don't have to fill out one single paid offer.
    Hell - fill out those 15 offers and I'll paypal you 10 bucks right here, right now. (No referrals needed!)

    So, thats the twist I've put on my iphone website, check it out, tell me what you guys think of the images, and the system itself, and the layout changes!


    Thanks!
     
    Daz, May 21, 2007 IP
  2. Zerosleep

    Zerosleep Established User

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    #2
    I'd put a bit Glossy Effect to the site...
    Donno whats wrong but the site design doesn't look good to me :( :eek:
     
    Zerosleep, May 21, 2007 IP
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    marcusa007 Active Member

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    something is missig it looks a little flat no pizzaz. No call to action that jumps out.
     
    marcusa007, May 21, 2007 IP
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    Well thats what I posted here for, asking WHAT it is its missing :)
     
    Daz, May 22, 2007 IP
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    marcusa007 Active Member

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    The call to action. It is a headline or something that draws your visitor into your site.
     
    marcusa007, May 22, 2007 IP
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    Maybe a big "GET YOUR FREE GIFT TODAY"?

    Great idea +rep :)
     
    Daz, May 22, 2007 IP
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    marcusa007 Active Member

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    Limited time only!
    GET YOUR FREE GIFT TODAY
    CLICK HERE NOW!​

    Would be better. It tells the customer the deal, tells them to act now or loose the deal and finalizes with the call to action CLICK HERE NOW! Play aroun with the design on that and make it fit into the page but the focus of the page when the client lands on it.
     
    marcusa007, May 22, 2007 IP
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    dp-user-1 Well-Known Member

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    marcusa007, that just makes it seem like a scam. And like they're desperate for money.
     
    dp-user-1, May 23, 2007 IP
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    marcusa007 Active Member

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    not if you do it tasteful. If you were to take big red letters for sure would look like scam.
     
    marcusa007, May 23, 2007 IP