Hi everybody, I have a new CB product and I would like to know what affiliates think of it. please go to www.personaltrainerjob.com I am using aweber for subscribers and have 7 emails so far. Subscribers are sent to another page where it doesnt have a popup. Affiliates still get commission. I have been working on this for the last few months and has only just been accepted. what do you think?
It looks pretty good overall! Might want to correct a few minor spelling errors... but otherwise, nice visual design. You might want to extend the copy a bit more - call out more about exactly how the product will benefit peoples' lives, talk about what it's like to be a personal trainer and what an "average day" might look like to enhance peoples' overall idea of it, etc etc. Also, I'd try to add/equate some sort of monetary value with the things you're providing to them - from the looks of it, it seems to me like it's some information on how to become certified and a few forms - though, that could be because I don't accurately/adequately perceive the value of the information. Tying a price tag to it could help people equate value with it. Otherwise, it looks pretty good. Have you had any sales yet? -T
Awesome ideas! I will implement them tonight.. i like the idea on adding dollar values to the forms etc. No sales yet, Only just turned my adwords campaign on a few minutes ago Will be submitting articles over the next week and will also get a press release going.. Just optimizing the pitch page first
I have made the changes as stated above. I couldnt see any spelling errors, are you able to point them out? I am in Australia so maybe thats the difference?
I think you need more details about your program. Maybe provide some examples. The sales pitch comes too soon IMO.
Im doing my best to get a sale. spent $9 so far on adwords but no sale yet. hey, atleast im honest and not saying it converts at 1 in 10
IMHO well you might want to make it longer to justify the sale...I really think it is too short for a direct link from adwords to work.
yeah I think your right.. I have had quite a few clicks from adwords but no sale yet.. tho I am thinking of making the index page shorter and having an opt in email.. then after they opt in they are sent to the main page? Quite a few CB products do this and it may be a better way to get leads?
I really depends on the niche wether a person would want to sign up for an opt in....I dont have experience in your niche but i wouldn't expect many personal fitness trainer newsletters? Yes after looking again i really think it is too short,, i mean if i was looking for a personal fitness trainer thing....would i really buy a $35 product because of a relatively short product letter? Then again... I wouldn't be a person to base an opinion off since I'm not looking for that product. Arg its time for me to stop rambling.
I just read your sales letter, and I think you should explore more deeply about the benefits your customers would get if they buy your product. It wouldn't hurt either if you tell more about yourself to convince your (potential) buyers... why we should trust you? what are your accomplishments to make you an authority in this field? Those things are quite important for buyers, I believe