Critique my updated homepage

Discussion in 'Placement / Reviews / Examples' started by Bombaywala, Mar 6, 2007.

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    Bombaywala, Mar 6, 2007 IP
  2. fallen1

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    #2
    very nice...


    maybe add some images to make your content more attractive...:D
     
    fallen1, Mar 6, 2007 IP
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    #3
    The ads are well blended! But for the site, I think there's so much text everywhere.. it needs to be a bit more organized (maybe seperate the tables by adding different background colors)
     
    8everything, Mar 6, 2007 IP
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    i agree a liitle too messy...

    horizontal bars are an easy fix...if you want:D
     
    fallen1, Mar 6, 2007 IP
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    Darkhodge Well-Known Member

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    #5
    A few comments from me :)

    • I think you should change the header so it's more defined and seperate from your main content.
    • I would personally remove the search unit as it usually doesn't perform very well (in my experience) and it makes the site look messier.
    • Give the site a little more structure instead of having text everywhere with nothing but whitespace (and the occasional lines). This could be done by placing the text within image boxes or something...

    Hodge :)
     
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    #6
    just retain your blending...its great:D
     
    fallen1, Mar 6, 2007 IP
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    the background behind the categories section in the sidebar is very confusing.

    The color of the article heads are not chosens well. They are not eye- friendly and make the whole thing look messy.
     
    Michelangelo, Mar 7, 2007 IP