Ooh that's pretty cool neron, could you make the no hope text slightly bigger though, and put it above astronaut?
Can you explain this please? I'm going to change the letters and maybe try to put the star in a different position...
Yeah, what I mean is - if we can get the basic text right, we can then look at adding some kind of small graphic, instead of tyring to get both right at once. So, could you show me a one line design with just the text as you have it in your second entry, with the As changed to being the same as the rest of the text? Then we can go from there, sound ok?
Yes, of course! n°1 is the "old" one n°2 is it with same font n°3 is it with a similar font (I've changed some letters: 'P', 'T' and 'O' that are in the 'A's font)
I will definentally make those changes the minute I get home but I have to go to school I love circa survive and some other bands though and I like your guy's sound. Do you want me to make a subtle astronaut reference though or not? I am slightly confused
Istvan - I like the bottom one best, except it looks to me like astronaut is a bit brighter than no hope, could you try and make them the same? If I'm not seeing things that is! Now feel free to experiment a little with text position and small graphics! ATF - actually, you can forget about any capital letters, just make it all lowercase. If you could make up a few different ideas for something to replace the tree in a similar style (one of them with an astronaut), that'd be great. Also for both of you - the simpler the better when it comes to a graphic, colour-wise and drawing-wise. Thanks again for all your work on this!
Here is one with an astronaut Anything can be changed, or a different image can be made I think it fits your band more personally, -ATF EDIT: Here is a little more simple one, an X for "no hope"
Hi, here is a design that I have put together. Hope you like it. Feedback much appreciated, thanks...
Wow, where to start..? ATF: I like bits of both of them, the thing about the astronaut one is, its a big too big and goes a bit too far above the logo, and he looks like he's striding happily! Could you try to make it slightly smaller, or perhaps not go so far above the text? I actually like the cross one, could you show me ie without the brackets and all text the same size (if its not already)? hs143no: It's a very nice design, but a bit too art school for us, doesn't suit our music at all really. We're not 'street' enough luvlee: I really like your style. I can't quite make up my mind about the first one, although a change i'd definitely like to see is without the brackets and with the As a normal font. As for your second one, it's very nice, is there a way to make the fancy stuff at the side just slightly less prominent? I think I'd like it if the two lines of text were slightly more similar to each other. Also, where have I seen that before - is something similar in a film logo, or another band logo or something? Thanks for the entries, i'm impressed! Istvan: The text at the bottom is a bit too much over the top, and the crossed guitars thing is too cheesy Could you try with a star, a cross etc in there, see if you can find something a bit more appropriate? neron: I prefer the first design with not so much colour behind itThere's something I don't quite like about 'no hope' - I think it's the fact there are so many letters in blocks like the N O O and E. Could you reduce the amount of these and try and make the text a bit more like 'astronaut'? I think it would work better in capitals. Thanks again everyone for your input and hard work, I look forward to seeing the revised designs!
Pretty good, Sandeep. The two main things I would say is that I'm not overly keen on the font (it's not very easily readable), and the O is just a bit too big. If it's easy enough, could you also show me it in red?
Sandeep, I love it. Can I ask you to show me a few different versions I can show to the rest of the band? How about experimenting with: Having the 'no hope' text not arched, and see if there's any way you can make 'no hope' more readable without changing it too much. Having the O slightly smaller Switching the colours around a bit? I wouldn't mind seeing what some red looks like in there somewhere. Good job, really looking forward to seeing a few different versions.