!NEW! Business Card design

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by Mr.tyro, Feb 18, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hello I think I disappointed allot of people here and myself with the other card design so i made a new one I think it’s much better. The grey corners are "bleed space" meaning the will cut it off when printed, they are all business card regularity size. I think il put this on my portfolio but I will need to make some professional business ones. My cards should be printed for quality not for quantity so rate and cc.

    I made two conceps say witch one is better in your opinion.

    Concept 1:
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    Concept 2:
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    Mr.tyro, Feb 18, 2007 IP
  2. 8everything

    8everything Peon

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    #2
    I love the first design! (I think there's too much of a contrast between the colors in the second one). Wow, really nice and edgey design! The colors work well together too.
     
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  3. Mr.tyro

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    yup thanx i was going to go with the 1rst one and no the info on it isnt real
     
    Mr.tyro, Feb 18, 2007 IP
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    #4
    yeah they are great designs - you should be happy with both. And i would go with the first design also.

    im not as big of a fan with the back of the card - i think with a bit more time you could come up with something better there.

    oh and i know its not the correct info listed there...but make sure you change it to graphic designer...not graphicS because thats just wrong :D

    great work again though
     
    unitedrokz, Feb 18, 2007 IP
  5. Mr.tyro

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    lol i dint see the s on the end of that i will do change it.
    Meh i tried balancing the front becosue its so graphics heavy and make the back just plain
     
    Mr.tyro, Feb 18, 2007 IP
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    killerj Active Member

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    #6
    this is much better :) .. Nice card :D
     
    killerj, Feb 18, 2007 IP
  7. Mr.tyro

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    i am going to create a verry busines like one or maybe another atistick one.

    update:

    [​IMG]

    post will do a business one soon

    come on anymore cc's please
     
    Mr.tyro, Feb 18, 2007 IP
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    ash1 Active Member

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    #8
    i think the first 1 is better
     
    ash1, Feb 18, 2007 IP
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    #9
    Too busy for my tase.
     
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  10. Mr.tyro

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    #10
    probably , i wanted to make something artistick
     
    Mr.tyro, Feb 18, 2007 IP
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    NICKY Nitro Well-Known Member

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    #11
    I am already in love with the second card.:)

    Why? My argument is that to human perception more contrasted colours do look more artistic and leave a deeper trace. (I am sure about the existence of this effect, to add :))
    However, you have the final say, Mr. Tyro ;)

    By the way, I really do prefer the first card design (in the previous thread) - looks to me more stylish in its minimalistic essence...
     
    NICKY Nitro, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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    #12
    very nice design
     
    RossCheal, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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  13. Mr.tyro

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    hehe i dislike the other one alot unles i update the other one.
     
    Mr.tyro, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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    thanx man ima stick to , artistick styles
     
    Mr.tyro, Feb 20, 2007 IP
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    NICKY Nitro Well-Known Member

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    #15
    I didn't get your idea, to be honest.:D Got messed in what you like and dislike.

    May I ask for a bit clearer explanation? I am really interested, that's it.:)
     
    NICKY Nitro, Feb 21, 2007 IP
  16. Mr.tyro

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    I dislike the other pure balck card that i made.
     
    Mr.tyro, Feb 21, 2007 IP
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    #17
    Looks great (I can only see one card).
     
    Ducati, Feb 23, 2007 IP
  18. Mr.tyro

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    umm that suxs, limited bandwith i think
     
    Mr.tyro, Feb 24, 2007 IP
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    #19
    reduce the point size of the text in the designation and address lines.
    The card seems a bit "loud" at the moment.

    since the name is in lower case, so in order to obtain consistency all content should be in lower case.
     
    jbladeus, Feb 24, 2007 IP
  20. Mr.tyro

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    Yup laud is me but the case thing i made the rest caps becouse it needed to stand out.
     
    Mr.tyro, Mar 10, 2007 IP