Criticism needed for new banner

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by redz, Feb 16, 2007.

  1. #1
    I made a banner today and I need some Criticism on it to find a way to improve my design skills, anyway here is the banner, tell me what you think:
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    ps: hope this is the right section :D
     
    redz, Feb 16, 2007 IP
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  2. toby

    toby Notable Member

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    #2
    nice design, redz. How about changing the color to be more vivid? I think the color is too fade.
     
    toby, Feb 16, 2007 IP
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  3. redz

    redz Well-Known Member

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    I will try that, the only reason I used these colors was to match the site I am putting it on and also because they are earth toned.
     
    redz, Feb 16, 2007 IP
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    I don't like the stroke that much...try using a gradient.
     
    `Sly, Feb 17, 2007 IP
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    I'd say mess with some filters or text effect to get a nice looking text shine/glow to it. Good start, just seems it could be polished more.
     
    GHOwner, Feb 17, 2007 IP
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    NICKY Nitro Well-Known Member

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    Hi there, Redz,

    I do love your banner - it's neat, it's enough simple (to match the your "natural" idea), colours are properly chosen. However, I also would lay stress on some colour accentuation and the usage of some glittering (/glowing or any other of the sort) effect to make it a banner to remember.:)

    Have a nice day today ;)
     
    NICKY Nitro, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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    gio Well-Known Member

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    how about replacing the letter 'O' with the earth image?
     
    gio, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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    ichigo Well-Known Member

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    why not use the web 2.0 glass like effect :D
     
    ichigo, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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    Bjam Well-Known Member

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    #9
    Nice design but i think the colours are too soft
     
    Bjam, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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    Yes, I also think that you have a nice concept but the colors or the shade of the colors that you used made it too simple:)
     
    mastermemei, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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    redz Well-Known Member

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    If anyone can improve it, please do so :) your work would be much appreciated :D
     
    redz, Feb 19, 2007 IP
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    I personally think the design needs an update.. something web 2.0 and modern! Can you design icon similar to yellowicon.com (to view the style). If yes, I would make your globe like that to make it more appealing. Good start on the colors though :)
     
    8everything, Feb 20, 2007 IP
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    cool banner ,plz work on color selection
     
    jagsy, Feb 21, 2007 IP