We have such a close similarity in taste my friend... I also write many poems. If you come here I can show you my certificates that I won in poem writing competitions. I have few of them published in our college Magz also last year
Great man I hope we do enjoy when we meet. Khoob Jamega rang jab mill baithenge teen yaar Aap, main aur.. Orange Juice (As I told you earlier I don't do Daru ) IT
When Ever I Look Into Your Eyes All I See is My Cheat and Lies. I remember the first time we met We went down to subway and had a baguette You went in my car,we went really far reaching the state border by two. then the first kiss,found all i needed was you.....
Oh yes I am enjoying this thread My poem on Daaru and a Darua: (For the English readers, Daru means Liquor and Darua means Liquor addict) Daaru Aaj jo uthaya pyaala daru ka din me chauti baar Saath dene se keeya hamara, haatho ne inkaar Dekha hamne ye manzar, kya ye thha daaru ka vaar? Ya fir kisi tarah se shaayad ham jindagi se gaye thhe haar? Jo bhi ho ye daaru ka bhi tha apne kism ka aetbaar Hak bhi banta thha daaru kaa, aakhir saalo se thhe ham uske yaar Daaru ko dekar keeya gunah shaayad hamne, itna saara pyaar Dil toh keeya kee aaj hi nikal dein kamzarf par saara gubaar Jaane kaisi aaj padi thi daru aur hamare beech daraar? Par phir hamne raah pakdi khatiya kee jo padi thhi bahaar Achanak kya hooaa jaane kee gire ham jordaar Aur aawaaj sun hamari dahne kee padosi aa gaye hajaar Kuch ne kaha luchcha, toh kuch ne kameena gawaar Kisi ne nahi samjha aakhir hamare dil kee pukaar? Naa ban rahaa thaa chalte naa uthate aakhir maan hi li hamne haar Jaane ye nasha thha yaa ho chale thhe ham sharaabi laachaar Hamdardo ne uthaya aur yaad dilaakar keeya khabardaar Bhaijaan sambhlo ab gaye purane din, ab hain aap Cancer ke Shikaar Oh and btw Grafstein, bro add another line after the fifth one it doesn't fit perfectly right now, otherwise its awesome man IT
Correctus Now you Are totally involve In This Thread , also i read all your posts in this thread realy great poem & Songs
Short translation for the english readers: "I am drunk and I will be drunk forever but if you would be mine I could save my liver"
That was a great idea Ask Dp members for help on writing a love song Some bright sparks on this forum
Correctus you are awesome. I just started this thread for fun, songwriting isn't my thing. I am more interested in Acting. By the way if any one turn it into a tune (a real song) that will be so cool.
I am officially the worst poet in the history of mankind (as rated by my parents, teachers and friends). When i was in school I always used to get A+ in every subject except literature (poetry crap). Even now i almost completed my college education, Often I don't understand the poetry properly. One thing is for sure. "POETRY DOES WORK WITH GIRLS"