Let's Write a Romatic Song

I always want to write a romantic song. But couldn't do that because i never find the right words (probably its because i never fall in love, don't know how it feels to be in love).

So here is the Idea I request all DP members to help me to write the song.
What you need to do is to write few words about your love in lyric/poetry form.
But whatever you write, it should be straight from your heart.

here is the first line...........

Whenever I look into your eyes

 

I see the lust and desire... lol keep it going

 

to maybe eat two pies

 

...and leave you out in the desert.

 

Whenever I hear your voice...

 

I want to kill you.

 

...because you sound like Fran Drescher,

 

And You just won't shut up!

 

ok i will try....
Whenever I look into your eyes
i felt.......
no i dont want to tell wats the next line will b
you will tell to other.

 

here is what i got so far

Whenvever I look into your eyes
I see lust and desire
I remember the moonlight kisses

......

 

DESIRE​

Genre: Rock/Metal

Whenever I look into your eyes,
I see the lust and desire
Tis true babe I speak no lies
My soul goes haywire

Chorus:

DESIRE OH YEAH DESIRE....
HAYWIRE MY SOUL GOES (yeah) HAY-WIRE

The lust and desire in your eyes
(Its killing me as poison kills mice)
Drop those eyelids babe or else
MY BODY WILL GET ON FIRE!!!!

Chorus (2)​

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To be continued later

Kiddos you can't win against me in lyrics, kay?

IT

 

wow correctus, if you need some guitar tune, I may help you

 

Guitar? Yeah some electric one will do.

Then I need Drums... a whole Drumkit in fact.

This thing can be successful actually, just need to do it properly.

IT

 

Wow! I didn't know that there are also musicians among the DP members. What if we make a DP Rock Band??? Nice idea huh??

 

I can put a bass line or two on that song, make a file with guitar and vocal + click track and send it to me and I will put bass and send it back to you.

 

Lol, I play guitar well..it's my hobby I am a AIR (All India Radio) singer as well for fact

 

Login: I'll do that as soon as I meet bnts, we don't live very far compared to the distances in our country lol, so shouldn't be much time.

Bnts: We gotta do this soon

Oh and here is a rap version, I am not much into Rap but oh well just for a try:

Wheneva I look in to ya eyes oh baby
I see the lust n desire
its cuzza the lust oh baby that
my body's set on fire
desire! oh don' talk bout it now
it only makes me go high'er
your eyes speak so loud baby
i wonder why you chatter
coz if ya coulda keepa dumb for two short mins
your life'd be no doubt finer
oh look here babe (uh) dun walk away like that,
else whom i'll take to the.. diner (If this is gonna be a video, the babe's face should become like this- right after this line)
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Some in Hindi for the Indian people:

Jab bhee dekhoo teri aankho main
Ek tadap nazar mujhe aaye...
Teree aankho main kuchh baat toh hai
Jo chahe ye kah jaayein


Will write more later More Rap and Hindi if you people like it lolz. Comments are welcome

IT

 

Hihi..Correctus, you can sure become a great Musician..you have the taste of Music in you

 

Musician yeah I play Harmoniam, was nearly an expert until I left practice. I have a guitar as well but never got the taste of it.

But you know what I think I'd be a better lyricist. I love to make up lyrics. At school our teacher used to tell us to write poems for the school magazine and I wrote poems for all the 50 Students in my class and they got published on their names, but yeah I was still happy. They were four liner poems btw but then I was only 12 back then.

IT