Contest $150 USD Japanese Aussie Hybrid 48 Hrs

Hi all,

I'm going to wait until midday to review all submissions and offer constructive feedback.

all are looking awesome though!

 

this is nice. Can we try and create a break in the "i" so it appears more of an i, also how do we treat the e? It seems off for some reason

 

nah I dont like this design. Almost like monsters inc type script..

 

yea ok I get your vision. Could you wrap that on the 500ml bottle? So we can get an idea for its total aesthetic?

 

Nah not a fan of these.. they seem rough and very bland. It doesnt pop for me..

 

I dont mind this... I think I prefer the yellow on black.

how could you make this slightly more feminine? Our target audience will be women..

Could you try another name? "Power Wash"? See if you can make that name work for this design.. it's very striking

 

Ooooooo now thats cool... I dont mind that.

that is the more feminine approach... still try "Power Wash" though

 

Wait

 

I'll submit soon