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Hello @BoyJohnson
My try

 

Hope you like it, Feedback Appreciated

 

another version. thanks!

 

My try, hope you'll like it.

 

Here is another submission from my side.



Thank you
Daraptor

 

Good day sir,
Here is my update, gladly accept any feedback sir for improvements.

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a variation from my previous design. thanks!

 

Hi again everyone, this is becoming a great contest. Direct client feedback below

#15 - seems too busy with the lines inside the lettering, not keen on the colour schemes.
#16 - Really liking this in both colours. can’t put my finger on what it is that i like but it definitely gets my attention.
#17 - Again liking the different variations in colour.
#18 - Prefer this to your original but it doesn’t grab my attention, don’t like the two colours on the wording maybe just stick to one colour?
#19 - Too Harsh and sharp not a fan of all the angles and straight edges.
#20 - different concept with the circular design, not a bad effort.
#21/22 - doesn’t work for me, but not sure why.
#23 - similar to #19 not liking the angles and straight edges.
#24 - really liking this style of the ION logo, again though not keen on the mixing of colours in the rest of the wording and having one line seemingly bolder than the other.
#25 - really like this, problem is I know what the three letters are meant to say and can see them but when I ask others what it says they can’t work out what the letters should be.
#26 - too simplistic and square edged compared to your previous submissions
#27 - too simple and plain

Going forward I think a colour scheme would be along the lines of those presented in submission #16 Greys/black with different colours, really like the green and orange versions. Would like to see a move away from sharp angled images, we really like the soft rounded logos such as, #16,#24,#25

Really like the complex mixing of the letters in # 25 but it must be able to be understood by someone who doesn’t know what the letters are in the first instance.

Thanks everyone, this is a great contest, direct client feedback above and he tells me we are nearly there, let's get this finished.

 

Here is my revised color scheme. fluid and very readable. thanks!

 

revised tagline. thanks!

 

Thanks for liking my design, will submit my revision very soon

 

Thank you @BoyJohnson for your feedback. Since the client has mentioned he wants soft rounded edges, I am submitting my previous design with those changes.





Thank you
Daraptor

 

Here is my revision after the feedback.

 

I already told you in private message that your previous design is so close to mine that if i revise my design it would be very close.
and now you are telling me i copied your idea? you are so funny!

clearly you are the one following my direction. it is recorded on the post time.

Edit: look at your last design. you are so determined to my direction that your logo reads ISS!

 

First of all this design cant be made in few minutes, and secondly there is a hell of a difference in my and your design,
Please check this, also I just flipped my N with I I didn't have to change my whole design idea as yours. please look yourself, after getting feedback attaching letters your design looked liked mine
CH holder asked me to separate letters so that everyone can read them properly so I did exactly he asked. it took few minutes to just flipped my N to I, but you copied my original idea and blamed me to copied yours. Please check your first design and than decide who copied whom?

My design is a continuity of my original design and yours is totally diffrent and copied by mine.

 

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first of all. a designer does not stop one sided. one has to explore all angles! my direction very close to what you are creating. but i am the first to submit this idea. here is my raw idea below the idea is in small letters and in wave pattern. just to make it clear that i submitted my idea first.

 

and you got the idea when you saw my design, look at your first design and mine, I used colors as per the feedback of CH.