Contest Health logo design - $50 [7 days]

Thanks for the next 2 entries. I like the second one best.
Can you make it less complicated. There's unnecessary stuff going on in the middle of the graphic. Also, having it huge above the text makes it difficult to scale the logo down as still see the text.

 

Thanks. Please take note of the comments on the previous version - the new one still includes both things I said that could be changed.

 

Thank you for feedback, here is revision ... and also new version, using letter "F":

 

Cool. I like the "F" ones the best so far out of all the entries.
It would be good to see some variations of the graphic. At moment I saw that you had to mirror it to put it next to the text.
And maybe the graphic is a bit too busy as well?

 

Hello, I don't know what you changed...

 

Apologies for that. Here's the revision of design

 

Thanks!
I still feel that the part on the very top is irrelevant as it has no connection or meaning for me.

 

ok cool, honestly I can revise the design all day as you desire unless you choose now the winner between me and @3SS to be the final graphic designer that will create your logo. No hate to @3SS if you choose him he deserved it.

 

Variation, will revise or change it tomorrow if you will need some change

 

Thanks for the feedback, another concept.

 

Hi, i am happy to join your contest, i would like to help and share my design with you. here is my concept, let me know what you think. thanks!

The butterfly concept expresses freedom, the wings have FF letters incorporated.

 

I'm not quite sure what you mean. Why would I pick between 2 that you have selected?
The purpose of a contest is to get varied entries to help give ideas that individuals won't think of - hence me giving feedback on your design to help you come up with something more in line with what I want.
Also, please ask as many questions as you want as that will get to the best design quicker.

 

Great! I really like the text. I like the idea of the graphic, however if it was displayed on its own, I don't feel it would be enough to represent my brand.

 

This one is ok. However, I feel the graphic is too recognisable - like a lot of similar logos all around the world with the "person" made out of lines and shapes.

 

Nice! I really like the look. However at the moment I feel like it belongs at the bottom of a page due to the shape and visual of the text. Maybe play around with that?