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This is the angle of the toilet paper. as if it was flying to me. I would like the wings to look more realistic and look like this:

 

Thank you for feedback
Here is modified version with toilet paper flying toward us and wings modified



Still anything , let me know
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Here is another modified version

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Here is my revision:

 

Please, let me know your thoughts on this?

 

nice wings! Can I have that on toilet paper? only use black and white. We are doing 1 color boxes.

 

Thanks for this!

I like your wings! Can I see them in just black and white? We are doing 1 color boxes. do some with different sized wings

 

This is good!
Try for a black and white design. See what it would look like as 1 color on a colored background. For instance:
How would it look as a logo on white on this box?
Also, I would like to see the toilet paper end come out straight behind or a little up as if it was flying behind the toilet paper. A little wrinkle in it could be awesome.

 

@twothirdsreturn any feedback on my design thank's

 

@Sashdesigns @Roro[DN] @technoguy are in the lead right now. Items like them would be great.

 

working on it , posting soon

 

Here is the logos in only white and black and white




Anything let me know , will be done
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