Contest 2 Logos - $100, contest for 7 days!

Quick feedback on your entries:

@agenk Thank you for your entry. Please follow the colour requirement. Please also do not focus on "UK", there is no hidden sense in pursuing it. I 'd prefer to see a different symbol out there. The connection between fashion/youth and health.

@ngodz
2nd logo - I like the connection of colours there. the elements are too tight to each other, I would like to see more space between them. I wonder if you could move a blue smile to the right side and/or decrease it. Instead of the blue butterfly, change a dot to yellow and add more flair to it.

1st logo - colours are different than the requirement, there is a lack of flair in the design, flexibility, it just does not work, sorry.

@sherwina the text works well, but the symbol does not work, it looks like a child has hydrocephalus, unfortunately, that's not what I meant by adding more style and beauty to the logo.

@me2_me2
1st logo - I can see what you tried to do but it did not work in this case, all elements are too compact, the face does not feel a relation to beauty, perhaps a different concept.

2nd logo- Text looks good, I like the font here, please add more colour (blue) to a text. I am not sure why is the association with a rose in this symbol. it does not work here very well.

@pehulz
1st logo - Thanks for another concept, it is creative, but not for my preference, the baby face looks cartoonish, pushing a concept with a baby and mother will not work.
2nd logo - it is much better looking, especially text, the smile/lips look like a bowl, so something more subtle here.

@getdomain4u
1st logo - I like the execution of my suggestion regarding the line and baby, but that's it. You changed hair, and you destroyed that great flair/touch and intimacy, a previous version had. Please go back to a previous version of a "baby hand" close to mouth and previous "hair" in the symbol and please add more flair/elegance/style to it, maybe by adding a bow to hair? Please also change the text to capital letters.

2nd logo - really nice! I like a chicky character there and that Hollywood suggestion in that lips symbol which can be related to dental and beauty services, really cool. Font style works well here too, could you please change the black font to blue one make all the elements less compact, please post on a white background. Thanks!

@Altruist Design Thanks! could you exchange smile symbol with a dot above "i" in "smile"? It lacks colour, what about blue and yellow, or different colours, I like to see some spontaneity out there.

@logos4all Thank you for another concept. There are too many elements there and they make a logo complex and less smart.

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Thank you for your concepts and revisions.
I found out that many of you would like to pursue a theme/symbol of mother and child. the original concept made by getdomain4you was a smart connection of elements and worked well, it still needs some corrections, however many similar attempts do not work very well, so please introduce more different or totally different concepts such as those entries from me2_me2, ngodz and agenk. I would like to see the differentiations between concept and different forms of creativity.

 

#2 - SmileMakeover

 

Thank you for your feedback. Here's my revision for the second logo. Thanks

 

@CH

Thanks for the invite

will Submit my entry soon

Thanks
Kain

 

Hope you like it, feedback Appreciated

 

Thanks for the invite @Gregory Kowalski

 

Thanks for invitation....

 

Feedback on your further revisions and designs:

@dmax2020 Thanks for your entry. That's another perspective of the same theme -mother/baby, please think about the different concepts.

@me2_me2 Thanks, the 2nd logo is too empty, the symbol does not work. there is a lack of excitement.

@ngodz thanks for following my feedback, it is much better now. Please remove these yellow rays from the dot and increase this a little bit. Could you try to add more impact to that "blue smile" and extend or move it to the right?

@getdomain4u yees, it looks much better, thanks. Could you please make a few different versions of bows or different attachments/flair elements in hair. could you also adjust the hair/face to suit fit a full circle of the moon on the left side - similar as a perfect half-circle on the right. I believe you will have a ready logo soon and a strong contender, indeed.

@kainraziall Thank you for your entry. That is a really good concept, it is stylish and caring at the same time. Could you please make convert the text to capital letters on a pure white background, to reduce face a bit to accommodate more space on the right of the face. well done on the first design.

@sherwina Your first concept on 2nd logo was best, symbol needed to be changed, etc. but it is fine, I accept that one as your final idea.

@divineworld Thanks for the entry, @divineworld , @agenk please keep the focus on different concept, theme mother/baby does not work here and in the majority of the other designs.

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Please do not pursue a mother/baby theme. Try to be more creative with your own concepts.

 

#SmileMakeover




#uk health & beauty

 

Thank you for your feedback. Here's my revision. Hope you like it. Thanks

 

@CH, Thanks for the feedback, Revision here, Hope you like it

 

Smile-Makeover Logo, Hope you like it