Contest 2 Logos - $100, contest for 7 days!

@getdomain4u That is much better. Thanks. Still, the red background is much stronger than the white one. first, fonts. Could you please try LondonMM or diamond fonts, or anything similar to those fonts. I would like to get a more subtle and luxury look. Then, the more difficult part, could you make a part of the moon on the right to a shape of a baby, that left side is a shape of a woman to have a synergy, wonder whether this is possible.

 

here is my revision for the 2nd logo.
I will try to submit a design on the uk health and beauty this afternoon

 

feedback appreciated,

 

here is my entry for the 1st logo

 

#1 - UK Health and Beauty. Waiting for your feedback

 

Thanks! Please keep them coming, some great concepts.

@sherwina Thanks for the revision. Yes, you adjusted a little bit of font. in terms of consistency, previous main text looked slightly better, more concise, I thought you will make some changes to the main symbol a tooth, to emphasize on the beauty aspect of the services too.

2nd logo - I thought I saw a similar design somewhere that circle does not work very well, colour adds more dynamics and hair as leaf which symbolizes green/organics products the company is planning to sell too. Good concept, it needs to a great amount of polish.

@jeproox Thank you for taking part in the contest. This one, unfortunately, does not work very well. I see two different elements, not related to each other, please see below a connection element if you want to pursue of the connection of a stylish woman and baby:
You can see it look more compact. This is just an example, how you could connect elements, but looking forward to totally different concepts than mother and baby only.

@3SS Thanks for your second contribution. Maybe a symbol is too big in comparison to text, this face does not work very well in this context. Please change the concept, if possible.

@getdomain4u , I really like this one! it is a great impact/intimacy between female face and baby. I made this a low-end edition to see if there can be more purity between two elements. Could you add more flair to the woman face/hair to emphasize more on the beauty aspect? A good contender, for sure!


2nd logo - it is definitely too dark, I don't see that "Hollywood smile" content there. It is modern but too simple with straight elements. Please focus more on the beauty services aspect too, as the botox and spa treatment will be the services provided too.

@me2_me2 Thanks for the entry. A different approach, it looks interesting, however, it looks more like a fashion brand symbol than an e-commerce website. Nice try though! the symbol is too big in comparison to a text too.

@ngodz Thank you for your entry and contribution. These two elements: text and symbol do not have a connection, maybe because the symbol is too small, the background in a symbol symbolized a water drop or a leaf, it is not clear, too many elements. That baby does not look subtle, it is definitely too bold. You absolutely do not need to go in the direction of mother and baby, I will look forward to seeing more different concepts too.

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2nd Logo inspirations:
All of you, you can see some examples of smile logos here to get some inspirations: https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/181762534932807297/?lp=true

 

Other variation.
Ver 1



Ver 2

 

#2 - SmileMakeover

 

another try

 

Thanks for the feedback, another version.