Review my About page please

This is the main section of my About page. It is for a fraud prevention consultancy website......

analyst3, Principal Consultant

For businesses selling online, the best defense against fraud is a robust proactive fraud prevention strategy. A strategy
that repels and voids any criminal attempt to commit cyber crime.

Who better to help you custom design your fraud prevention strategy than a man who spent years circumventing all
types of anti-fraud measures?

Who better to help you protect your business than a once convicted - turned good guy - fraud prevention specialist?

After all, organizations like the US Department for Homeland Security, companies like Microsoft, and
online retailers like NewEgg rely on reformed cyber criminals to help them fight cyber crime. Why shouldn't you?

I'm analyst3 and yes, I'm a former (reformed) fraudster. And after seeing where my choices led me, I decided to change
directions - more precisely in the opposite direction - by dedicating myself to helping merchants protect their businesses
against fraud.

May be your fraud department have been having some issues trying to mitigate some attacks. This is where I can help you
and your team get on top of the problem.

I know how fraudsters think. And how they operate.
Due to my extensive experience I can identify areas of concern in your fraud protection and advise you and your team on
the best way to address those issues.

 

Seems good enough..But how do you know "how fraudsters think" ? Just a light note.

 

I've been around fraudsters with different levels of skill and from different countries for several years. But more importantly...I was a fraudster.

 

Okay. Now your "about" page make sense.