Contest LOGO FOR PERSONAL TRAINER - 80£ -

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Hi there thanks for the entry the idea look good but this is not flat, there is too many details on the barbell also the head looks very plain!
May helps if you would correct this two things also the fonts not is to tiny as well. try to make a little bit ticker font also a whole head and the bending barbell like a mustache will see how it looks like

 

HI thanks for your entry this is not what we are looking for!

 

Hi Thanks for your entry, we like the typography part so far this font fits with our idea, also the barbell looks flat enough the line under the logo is fits as well great idea, the head is looks a bit weird but not bad at all, could you make the barbell bit bending it's looks like broken also, we had an idea like the barbell goes on the mouth like when someone bite the barbell, but this would be an another version correct the recent one and if you may could do the our idea as well that would be nice.

 

Hi, same thing with the another the barbell is to complicated there is to much details, also the head not shows any anger or power, it's just smiling. We want a face what represents the power the anger for gains on the gym!

 

What about mine? welcome for any kind of change...Thanks..

 

Hi there thanks for your entry this in not what we are looking for, it's not avaible for print or branding.
Thank you

 

Hi there thanks for your entry!
This not looks like what we are looking for, the typography to plain also the head and the barbell looks to tiny.

 

TO ALL DESIGNERS !!!
This concept is just one spine idea for what we are looking for, but we are open to any other kind of idea what shows the anger, power, and eye catch i'll link you here guys some video about my client to get an vision to your head how he is train what he is preach also dont forget the name must represent by the logo! Noisyiron Subtitle: chase the power

it's he's instagram https://www.instagram.com/ andy_dzekanskas/

 

Hi there thanks for the entry the typography not too bad, but the logo is too complicated there is to many details we are looking for some very flat and clean! Like Nike logo simple as fu** but great.

 

TO ALL

Some examples the style and the way when i say clean professional "flat" eye catching.

THIS IS THE BEST https://uk.gymshark.com/
why? gymshark is strongly represents the name also flat very simple and clean
If i could recommend someone for the best example is that the gymshark

https://logopond.com/malicho/showcase/detail/119939

https://logopond.com/carlos08/showcase/detail/177382 (this logo represents the name by far)

https://logopond.com/square69/showcase/detail/192876 (this logo represents the name as well also look great)

https://logopond.com/OLIVERAKOS/showcase/detail/149417

https://logopond.com/Behemoth/showcase/detail/277316 ("too many details" but still fits with the name)



THIS ARE EXAMPLES DON'T try to make same design only i wanted to show the style and the way how we try to build our logo.

Hope it would be helpfull to you guys, if you have any question let me know, let your creativity works haha, good luck!

 

Thanks for the feedback appreciate it, revision.

 

Entry Deleted. Contest Holder thinks i downloaded it from free vector. LOL!

 

Hi there check the examples what i write there before 3 comment, too complicated, not brandable its just cuted from some downloaded free vector.

 

Another idea: One screaming Bending barbell he like this kind on barbells we had thought may be interesting if a screaming barbell logo somehow if possible to design

https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/251474/screenshots/2858512/gym2_1x.jpg

 

He sent me a drawing now for an another way to design, a screaming head.