Contest Kindergarten logo - 24 hours - $35 Paypal - feedback given

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  1. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #21
    Thank you for entering. It looks similar to evodesign to me so I'm not sure what to suggest for changes.
     
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    #22
    Just wondering if you seen my updated version from the first post?
    Thanks!
     
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  3. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #23
    I did see it... I love the colors... and the image is great... but I'm not sure what to do with the words. Maybe the box smaller in front?
     
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    umgraphics Greenhorn

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    #24
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  5. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #25
    The layout is great, but I think I'll need something more simple. Can we change it to 2 colors, take the bow off the package, and remove the alphabet letters coming out of the box?
     
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    #26
    Here's my attempt. It's a little compressed here, but I have very a high res version of it.
    KCrate.jpg
     
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    umgraphics Greenhorn

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    #27
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    #28
    My revise:
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  9. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #29
    I like the shape of the box, but I think the box might have to be smaller and the words bigger?
     
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  10. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #30
    I like the concept for sure... think I want a non-cursive font... but don't worry about making more revisions if you want to wait to see who wins.
     
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  11. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #31
    I like the box for sure! Maybe put the words beside it... and change the yellow to the pink from the box confetti and the blue text to the blue from the box?
     
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    #32
    so i have added a pair of hands to portray the CARE of the kindergarten teachers to their students and TRUST that they can assure from the teachers, hope you like it :) kindergarten.jpg
     
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    #33
    With some changes.

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    #34
    I like the two colors... and the box is simple and nice... I'm not sure about the hands... but I will think about it. Thank you!
     
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    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #35
    Thank you for the revisions - I like it! :)
     
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    #36
    i m joining
     
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    Lisyhen Active Member

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    #37
    my entry, any feedback will be greatly appreciated (=

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    #38
    My entry,
    Kindergarten Crate copy.png
     
    Last edited: May 9, 2017
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    #39
    I am in love with your logo, especially on the black background. The colors really pop. Is there anything we can do to make the yellow of the word crate stand out more? (darker yellow, outline, shadow?) Thanks!
     
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  20. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #40
    excellent font! I would like the box to stand out more.
     
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