Hey Folks! Please review my website so I know I am doing good

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Deniel Watson, Dec 31, 2016.

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    Hey, guys, I would appreciate some feedback on our new website. I would like to get your opinions on how well the site communicates what we do/benefits/etc., and if you like the design and layout. So please your review is much important to me and if I doing some mistakes then please let me know. :)

    Thanks guys

    my website: http://thegreatestfart.blogspot.com

    PS: I didn't change some HTML codes :)
     
    Last edited: Dec 31, 2016
    Deniel Watson, Dec 31, 2016 IP
  2. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #2
    I viewed on my phone so may not have seen it at its best. My first impressions:
    • It's a me-too site, the content has been convered many, many times before
    • Fonts are all over the place
    • Contact us goes to another incomplete website
    • There doesn't seem to be any reason for the odd subdomain that you have chosen
     
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  3. Deniel Watson

    Deniel Watson Greenhorn

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    #3
    i didn't get your first point can u further explain?

    and yeah I am sure to fix all four issue

    Peace
     
    Deniel Watson, Dec 31, 2016 IP
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    cerno Well-Known Member

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    I believe sarahk is pointing out that most of your content is popular topics similar to that of many other websites. It will be difficult for you to build an audience in such a competitive category as game reviews when you are disadvantaged by working on blogger. I searched for several snippets of your content to determine if your content is original and no matches appeared. This means your content isn't plagiarized, that's good, but the bad news is Google doesn't appear to be indexing your content, or at least including it in search results.

    I don't understand why you would invest your time developing a blogger site unless you are simply writing a diary for yourself and a few friends that will visit your domain directly. If you want to invest time writing articles and working on real websites on good domains with the potential to build and audience and make money, just send me a pm with a couple of topics of interest to you.
     
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  5. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    Really?

    Did you put together a written business plan to see if the site was worth your time and effort?
    Did you look to see if there were other sites publishing the same kind of content?
    What do you offer that makes your planned site better than the rest?

    And if you are ashamed of your name and want to assume another at least spell it properly.
     
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  6. Jamie M

    Jamie M Member

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    Firstly if your serious about having a website and growing it, you need to invest in a domain name. The .blogspot puts me off clicking them kind of links, so it will others.

    Secondly, what exactly is your websites category? I see one post about WordPress then another about gaming then another about Syria. The way we've been growing our blogging/news website is by targeting one topic which is PlayStation Gaming.

    And lastly I had some problems loading it on my tablet, the navigation bar didn't work and it looked all messed up until it loaded fully.
     
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    The used fonts are really difficult to read.
     
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