Can you look at my website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by delergecer, Jun 6, 2016.

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    Greetings from turkey i am learning english and i designed a website. My english is so bad can you look at the website? Is the language of website understandable and fluent? Its very important for me i am waiting for your options :) website: traveltovisit.com
     
    delergecer, Jun 6, 2016 IP
  2. gypsiseo

    gypsiseo Member

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    I have visited, good theme of ur website. But its like u have made it very newly. I would love to see its improved version when u will update let me know.
    thanks
     
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  3. delergecer

    delergecer Greenhorn

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    #3
    thanks for your answer :) :) is the articles understandable and fluent?
     
    delergecer, Jun 6, 2016 IP
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    Angelictext Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Your website looks OK - the photos are good and the theme works. However, you could do with someone to proof your written content.

    "Those who want to make early booking, must be hurried becasue all hotel rooms can be hired in a short time from concentration." I understand what you mean, but it's not the best! :) It's a start though.
     
    Angelictext, Jun 8, 2016 IP
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    satguy Well-Known Member

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    It's not too bad for someone that says he has bad English, one or two bad sections, but otherwise your writing is fine.
    As a native English speaker, we are used to travel sites that may not be perfect, and it is the little mistakes that make us feel, "it's holiday time"

    So,, writing fine,, But your theme needs a bit of work...
     
    satguy, Jun 8, 2016 IP
  6. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    I appreciate that English isn't your first language but this makes no sense.
    I'm not sure that Visa requirements have any impact on the decision to travel to Turkey, certainly didn't when I visited in '93 - there was one kid on the plane who had bought the ticket that morning and thought he was going to Greece.

    I am surprised that my facebook feed still shows friends in the UK having holidays in Turkey, from my side of the planet, watching mainstream news media, Turkey looks like it's only just coping with Syria and ISIS and is a country to avoid.
    Totally agree with that!
     
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    Angelictext Well-Known Member

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    I live in the UK and I don't know anyone who is heading to Turkey this year. Spain is now the go-to destination, which is great for Spain, but not so great for the Turkish tourist industry.
     
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    Agent000 Prominent Member

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    ^^^What sarahk said.

    Your use of the English language, grammar and sentence syntax makes the site useless junk of no value to anyone.
     
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  9. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    Totally, and in reality most people would be completely safe if they stuck to the beaches and resorts. Probably inland at Cappadocia would be ok too. The OP needs to have a page addressing safety concerns.
     
    sarahk, Jun 8, 2016 IP
  10. Angelictext

    Angelictext Well-Known Member

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    Not so sure about the safety on the beach bit. Look what happened in Tunisia last year...

    I agree about the page referencing safety concerns. It's a big issue right now.
     
    Angelictext, Jun 8, 2016 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    One incident on one beach by one person acting alone. It influences people's decisions but I'd be more worried about dead refugees being washed up on the beach than one nutter with a gun.
     
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    Spoiltdiva Acclaimed Member

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    #12
    I checked out your website. It is interesting and you came off as friendly and welcoming. But I can tell that you sometimes rely on Google Translate to help you. Please avoid using this as your English will come off as robotic and will fail to make sense.
    You'd be better off using broken English. That way you will still get your message across, and we will know that you were at least trying. Good luck to you with all.
     
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  13. delergecer

    delergecer Greenhorn

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    Thanks for your comment :) i will take into account your writing teşekkür ederim dostum :)
     
    delergecer, Jun 29, 2016 IP