can you look at my website?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by deler, May 18, 2015.

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    is the website's gramer true? I m turkish i want to introduce my country. I will open site with .com but i want to try myself. Is the website's content understandably?
    www.newplacetravel.blogspot.com
     
    deler, May 18, 2015 IP
  2. deler

    deler Member

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    Update
     
    deler, May 18, 2015 IP
  3. blogdum

    blogdum Well-Known Member

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    I see lots of grammar errors. It's better if you hire a writer or test your writing with grammar checking tools and also buy a domain if possible.
     
    blogdum, May 19, 2015 IP
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    Hi, unfortunately, it is not. There are many errors and not only in grammar. You would need to improve your writing skills if you want the text to be readable and interesting. You are using very simple English, which is not suitable for what you want to express. Try to find an English teacher who could help you with that or hire someone for writing.
     
    O-D-T, May 19, 2015 IP
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    deathshadow Acclaimed Member

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    It makes about as much sense as your post here -- sadly that means it's utter and complete gibberish to an English language speaker.

    To go with it being an accessibility disaster too with the illegible fixed metric fonts -- and it being painfully agonizingly bad under the hood as well.
     
    deathshadow, May 20, 2015 IP
  6. Patricia Ann Lee

    Patricia Ann Lee Active Member

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    I suggest you hire someone to write for you, while having a chance to improve your writing skills, if you really want to pursue it.
    Practice makes perfect; it is good that you are aware that your work is not good enough, so improve more on it. Good luck!
     
    Patricia Ann Lee, May 20, 2015 IP
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    SocialSignals Well-Known Member

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    Even if you spelled everything correctly, English has its own order and idioms, similar to Turkish.
    This also makes the site look rather like a collection of datas than a touristic attraction site.

    You should either hire someone to write it for you. I don't think it's just about the language. It's how you write that also counts.
     
    SocialSignals, May 21, 2015 IP
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    Alex Lawford Greenhorn

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    I think it is fairly well written considering you are Turkish. However I would advise you to hire a writer to re write what you have done.
    PM me if you need help.
     
    Alex Lawford, May 21, 2015 IP
  9. deler

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    Update the website was edited. Did it become good :D
     
    deler, Jun 8, 2015 IP
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    Do your website content well. Better if you hire a content writer for writing your website content.
     
    Atikur, Jun 8, 2015 IP
  11. deler

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    Thanks
     
    deler, Jun 8, 2015 IP
  12. deler

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    Update is it understandably? i will try the site if it isn't understandably
     
    deler, Jun 8, 2015 IP