Contest $35 for a simple logo. Contest running for 48hrs

my try

 

My Try

 

here is my entry

a feedback is welcome

 

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Alternate edit:

 

Allow me to say something about feedback. By me providing feedback I do not mean to ask you for changes. Because normally I choose some finalists and then it's up to the finalists whether they do the changes or not. I am simply providing feedback in appreciation for your entries.

Playaone: thanks for the new entry. The M8 looks much cleaner now and it is easier to read but I feel that overall the logo looks a little plain. I wanted a bold font and yours is not that bold.

guideline: #16 looks good. I like it.

digital_irfan: good to see you again and thanks for entering this contest. Unfortunately I was looking for a bolder font. Also the M and 8 seem to be a bit too far from each other and I think I like a more "compact" logo where everything is closer together.


topsniper: thanks for the new entries. They look good but not quite there somehow. They are pleasant entries but somehow just not quite there yet.

best designers: sorry but doesn't do it for me. I like what you tried to do to the 8 but that makes it a little too busy. And also M8 doesn't seem to stand out from the rest and seems to be blended in together with gym

PurePurple: thank you for the entry but it is not what I am looking for.

pehulz: looks good but I still prefer a bolder font.

Erick0225: very nice and pleasant logos but M8 need to appear separate from gym even though they need to stay together. Something like this GYMm8 or gymm8 I hope this makes sense.

wotar: thanks for the entry but it is too complex. I need something cleaner and simpler for this project.

Kic3: thanks but it's not what I am after. I prefer a bolder font and the way you positioned the mm while creative does make it a little confusing when reading. the second one #28 is a lot better but just not unique enough somehow. Sorry but it's hard to give you feedback on it.

TMXX1: thanks but it doesn't grab me.

SGDESIGNS: looks good but I think I prefer a more round font.

Easter21: thank you for the entries but I prefer bolder fonts. I like them though.

Xdexter: good to see you again. I like it but the font needs to be bolder.

 

thanks for the feedback

 

Here is my entry:

 

Revisions:

 

revision with bolder font

 

Hi
My Try
1.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/l75pv5rl4tshifp/GymM8-01.png?dl=0

2.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/h19b2guisxx3m6d/GymM8-02.png?dl=0
Waiting for your reply.

Thanks
Mr.Nag

 

Revision

Logo Version 2

 

its my try

 

another try