Contest Logo needed $20 PayPal (sketch inside thread)

Hey everyone,

I need a logo for a dentist. Here is a sketch of how the logo should look like:



I would like to see the color gold used as much as possible. The teeth has to be 3D, something like this: http://www.3dcadbrowser.com/th/1/57/57552.jpg

The dots refer to the Da Vinci painting (http://designblog.rietveldacademie.nl/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/vitruvian_man_mixed.jpg)

The top text reads: Tandartspraktijk

I would like to receive a vector file of the logo (PSD, AI & PNG version)

 

Done and Done,
Will post submission shortly

 

please feedback.
regards. a-riif

 

Vector design
Software: Adobe Illustrator

Feedback required

 

Thank you for your entry. I am not really looking for something like that, the logo looks really busy and it doesn't just look right.

Thank you for your entry. I don't like the design, the border is not supposed to be filled with a color and the stripes are supposed to be dots. The logo doesn't have a corporate feeling to it.

 

do you want me to reinforce it or am i supposed to change the entire logo?

 

To be honest, I don't like the logo.

 

My try, feedback please!!

 

My entry:

 

Stop copying free work!

http://www.freepik.com/free-vector/tooth--teeth_334151.htm

 

this is very good

 

Thank you for your entry but this is waaaaay too cheap looking.

Thank you for your entry. I think the logo is a bit too childish looking and it doesn't look professional.

Thank you for your entry. I Like the directions you are going with the logo. Could you show me one with a bigger font?

Thank you for your entry. I think it looks pretty goot but is has a 2000's feeling to it, do you understand what I mean with that? Could you try to modernize it? Also the Lines are not adjacent on the second logo.

Thanks for both of you entries. I don't really like them, they have a very basic feeling to them.

Thank you for your entry. I like the border but could you make the entire logo more professional looking? Also the horizontal line is not adjacent.

Thank you for your entry. The logo looks pretty good but it's too flat looking and such a logo doesn't really go well in the 2010's