@Patriciu Thanks for the submission. I would most likely raise the Falcon logo up a little bit now that I look at it. Also I would keep the social media icons together a bit more. They feel too spread out. Last point, I'm not sure if I like the lights behind the subjects, I've used those same lights on a project before and have liked them in the past, however, on this type of project I think we could try something else. Maybe change the color of the lights so they aren't as vibrant- that might help. Also I would love to see what a stadium would look like in the background instead of a blank canvas. Try a few different things, I like where this is headed. Thank you!
Nice work, I like the simplicity. However from a distance it will be hard to see the text and even the figure. I would enlarge everything, especially the falcon logo. Thanks!
Nice, thats much better. Now that I look at it, its hard to see the text logo, if you could put a slight drop shadow on it, I think it might stand out a bit more
Thank you for joining the contest! I really like this, its a nice clean background, its very clear what is written. What file format is this in? Just a few changes I would make. #1-I would switch the text logo (Accelerated Sports Camps) with the Ultimate Off Season text. #2 - I would enlarge the athletes on the left and then curve the colors on them to match the rest of the image. Whether you go black and white or a subtle blue-ish tinge it could look cool. #3 I love the size of the social media icons, I would however enlarge the website and the "follow us" text just a bit larger. Great work though, thanks!
@ariif, Thanks for joining the contest! I like the direction you're going with. Just wondering what is the file format for the image? Just a few personal changes I would make though. #1 The background is a bit busy, you could probably take out the faded enlarged falcon image in the background. #2 With the athlete on the left, I like an intense look, but this might be too angry for me. I need to win over the hearts of parents to sign their kids up for camp, this guy might scare them away . Even the tattoo might be a distraction for them, I would probably take that off as well-cool idea though! #3 In regards to the text, the website text could be quite a bit larger, and the "Ultimate off season" text should be a bit more readable. There is a font called "defused" on dafont.com, that might work really well right there. Other than a few minor changes, I think you're really headed somewhere nice! Thanks!
@Patriciu Wow, very nice! Could you soften the colors up in the background (stadium) a black and white or a color grade the stadium to match an element within the image? Also with the website text, there's too much gradient, it will be difficult to get printed and then to be read legibly in a large gymnasium. Thanks!
Revised entry. The original file is 4ft x 8 ft. I have uploaded a resized version here.Feedback appreciated.
Attention Designers: Contest is now closed, thank you for your hard work! I am personally very impressed with the quality of designs in this contest, you designers are awesome! @Patriciu 's latest design (in white) has been selected for the $35 prize! I will reach out to you via private message to make the Paypal transfer. I will be launching another contest soon, please watch the forum and look for my invite via PM. Thank you again and Congratulations to Patriciu!