Hi, for the project I am about to launch I have a faq/sales copy in which I want to tell the reader what the program is all about, how it works, etc. Can I get someone to give me his opinion on it?. Is it properly written in a natural english way? (I am not english). Does it do the job of explaining what it's all about and how it works? Most importantly, does it convince the reader to want to join the program? Thanks, here it is: [deleted]
There's room for improvement. I was left with more questions than answers. For instance... I was questioning whether I was going to earn $300 per day, per week, or per month. I didn't realize it was $300 a month until I read through the questions and the fourth question mentioned every month. What is the company? What are people promoting on forums and social media?
What answers are those that you were left without??? About the $300 per month, it's true this faq doesn't express it very well but in fact it is written within a website, which main title says "Let's add $300 to your monthly income". People are basically promoting the website, sending us visitors (if these buy it will be trough their affiliate links of my product, so they will take 100% upfront commision, up to three times). This is how they make the $300 (using my methods to get traffic, my product, my website).
People need to stop trying so hard in the SEO and Blogging Niche LOL it is so diluted with crap and blahhh.. here is my brilliant plan people! I will title this project " Want to make $9,000 Today?" I just know everyone will buy it and make me rich LMAOOOO
Not bad. I think it is hard for us to evaluate since we know little about the program, but as far as what you've written, it should work. Your English is far better than most non-native speakers. Michael
Thanks for a little bit of positivity, I've had others telling me it doesn't even merit a critique because of how awful it is. Anyone else can give me his opinion??? Is it noticeable that it has been written by someone who is not native english???
its not that bad... I am not a writer but I think there are some simple improvements that could be made like: "The cost is a monthly subscription fee of $97. Think about it, you can pay for 3 months with just the income you will add from your first month into the program. Basically, you pay $97 and we tell you how to make $300. Every month! This is obviously not going to make you rich but, hey, the point is to add a little guaranteed income by following a step-by-step program that requires no technical knowledge whatsoever." You might want to try: "The monthly subscription fee is a mere $97, which is covered by our 100% money back guarantee. We guarantee that by following our simple, easy to follow program, that you will earn MORE then $97 per month, or your money back." Again, I am not a writer. As far as investment programs go though, it might be well worth hiring someone to improve the content as the current text doesnt instill trust. Additionally, not to pull your business plan apart, but $97 risk (plus time) for a $300 gain is a little risky IMO, and I cant see it attracting many people. If it was $20-$50 I think you could have success in attracting people to come and try.