Need Feedbakcs for http://www.partygiftideas.org/

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    Female1, Aug 14, 2013 IP
  2. bluebenz

    bluebenz Well-Known Member

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    Sorry, I got :
    'Server not found'
     
    bluebenz, Aug 14, 2013 IP
  3. ankit_jain

    ankit_jain Greenhorn

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    #3
    nice site but can be improved a bit.
     
    ankit_jain, Aug 14, 2013 IP
  4. Kerry Burke

    Kerry Burke Greenhorn

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    #4
    Hi
    You have alot of content on the site which is good for SEO and you provide a lot of information for the consumer which is positive.
    I think that the site could be more colourful and exciting, you are selling things for a fun event, however, i dont think that your website currently reflects this. Also if your site looks more appealing and brand specific consumers would be more inclined to purchase from the site. If your using wordpress i have seen some recent additions to their themes that would be perfect for your site! Again I think that your logo could do with some work, something that is exciting and you can use as a brand for your business to increase brand recognition. I also think that you could consider incorporating a condensed menu bar with categories that drop down into the individual sub categories as at the moment the menu bar is slightly overwhelming.
    In general I think that you have a good site and with a few tweaks and rebranding you could have the makings of a great site and fantastic business!
     
    Kerry Burke, Aug 15, 2013 IP
  5. Female1

    Female1 Banned

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    #5
    Hi
    Sometime server can be down so its not a big matter. You can check out again after some time.
    thanks
     
    Female1, Aug 15, 2013 IP
  6. Female1

    Female1 Banned

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    Hi2
    It is not easy as its look like. There are various problems which a person face while developing a website. I shall make these changes after starting earnings.... Overall...it is good to read such comments.
     
    Female1, Aug 15, 2013 IP
  7. Kerry Burke

    Kerry Burke Greenhorn

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    Perhaps having a website that is not of the highest qualtity to begin will not be such a good way to earn money in the first place? Also the server being down seems to be quite a big problem!
     
    Kerry Burke, Aug 15, 2013 IP
  8. Female1

    Female1 Banned

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    Server is not being down. And site is almost ready and I shall earn only after making it more ideal and user friendly.
     
    Female1, Aug 15, 2013 IP
  9. boom bap

    boom bap Active Member

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    Too much content on homepage. Your website has very long load time. Or maybe its because of server..
     
    boom bap, Aug 16, 2013 IP
  10. bluebenz

    bluebenz Well-Known Member

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    I dont like the logo either and also, did you make the top menu in 2 lines?
    Top category menu take 6 lines too?

    pictures, use high resolution..

    You talking about earning, but I don't see ads on your pages..
     
    bluebenz, Aug 16, 2013 IP
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    #11
    Your websites looks good.
    Good design, color and content.
    But, you can reduce the number of tabs and it wil look better.
    Right now it looks messy.
     
    Yapsody, Aug 16, 2013 IP
  12. XxHALOGENxX

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    it does look a little messy and maybe change the backgroung to an off shade of white
     
    XxHALOGENxX, Aug 16, 2013 IP
  13. Female1

    Female1 Banned

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    #13
    As i told in a previous reply that server is not being down. And site is almost ready. Further we are working on it .
     
    Female1, Aug 17, 2013 IP
  14. Female1

    Female1 Banned

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    #14
    That's the thing. I got your point and i will make the changes as you have said. let me think about it. Actually i will have to get further suggestions.
     
    Female1, Aug 17, 2013 IP
  15. Female1

    Female1 Banned

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    Hi Bluebenz
    Worth appreciated your straight forward views but i was not talking about earning right now just revise again on my previous talk about earning rather i explain again that i shall earn only after making it more ideal and user friendly.
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    Now i am just getting views and taking feedbacks , I like your point about top category menu should be consists of 2 lines too.
    Let me work on messy now .

    Well thanks to all for worth appreciated suggestions .
     
    Female1, Aug 17, 2013 IP
  16. Doonker Hosting

    Doonker Hosting Peon

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    I'm going to be blunt with you here. Your site a little too plain. Good content deserves a good theme when it comes to wordpress. You might want to think about using a simpler wordpress theme until you come up with better branding ideas. BUT as I said before good content deserves a good theme.
     
    Doonker Hosting, Aug 18, 2013 IP
  17. ISUCKATGOLF

    ISUCKATGOLF Greenhorn

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    How do you plan to make money from the site. (which I thought looked pretty good.) I was looking for affiliate links etc. but didn't see anywhere to buy anything or directed to a page to buy anything. Is that the plan, to build it and then monetize later?
     
    ISUCKATGOLF, Sep 12, 2013 IP
  18. schgrv

    schgrv Active Member

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    #18
    you have total of 34 links out of which 21 is follow and 13 is no follow. Its not looking very good what I feel.
    Also 21 links of your site is not good.You should try to get some more backlinks from some other domains as well because out of 34, 24 are coming from invitationtemplatesstore.com.
     
    schgrv, Sep 12, 2013 IP
  19. PartTimeJobsFromHome.Co

    PartTimeJobsFromHome.Co Peon

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    #19
    less meta description and too much keywords
     
    PartTimeJobsFromHome.Co, Sep 16, 2013 IP