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Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by nshadab, Jul 11, 2013.

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    i am writing a tag line to an online courses company....

    1234 learners across the globe
    1234 learners around the globe

    but i want to create something more creative, using synonym "bookworm" or something else....

    what's your expert suggestions.....
     
    nshadab, Jul 11, 2013 IP
  2. theserp

    theserp Greenhorn

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    Scholars, May be?
    Disciples? bibliophiles, students, intellectuals, readers, savants.

    Hope I helped!
     
    theserp, Jul 30, 2013 IP
  3. TextServices

    TextServices Active Member

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    1234 learners across the globe
    1234 learners around the globe

    Using the word "learners" is incorrect.

    If 1234 refers to how many people are currently taking courses the company is offering, you could say
    "1234 students enrolled in our online courses from around the world"

    "1234 students enrolled in our online courses worldwide"
    "1234 students worldwide"
    "1234 students enrolled worldwide"
    "1234 students enrolled"
     
    TextServices, Jul 30, 2013 IP
  4. nshadab

    nshadab Well-Known Member

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    @TextServices
    hmmmm...good one...
    but we are going to deal with professional people only.
    As we are planning to run advance courses online, so if we use this student word ... would it good?
     
    nshadab, Jul 30, 2013 IP
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    Emma Pollard Active Member

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    OP I see you point with the word Students, although technically they are studying and are therefore students the word itself conjures images of young adults. I think I would use the word Professionals, something like;
    1234 Professionals enrolled worldwide.

    It might also be good to put in a time frame of when they enrolled, was it in the past year are they still enrolled. This would give clarity as to how good the courses are, if 1234 people enrolled in the past year then that is good, but if 1234 people enrolled in the past two years then that's not so good!!
    Just a thought :)
     
    Emma Pollard, Jul 31, 2013 IP
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    TextServices Active Member

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    If you are targeting professionals, then you could replace the word students with professionals.
     
    TextServices, Jul 31, 2013 IP
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    SCookAAM Active Member

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    How about something like:

    1234 Global Knowledge Seekers

    1234 international Scholars in Training

    Expanding more than 1234 Minds Around The Globe

    Just some thoughts
     
    SCookAAM, Jul 31, 2013 IP