Please review my logo

Hi, i work for a company called "My Beauty Group" that sells spray tan booths and Aesthetic machines such as IPL etc. I've created a logo for the company and id like to get some feedback off people in regards to design, colours and any improvements you think could help the logo look better.

I feel its missing something or lacking in something but i can't quite put my finger on it. Any help would be much appreciated

Thanks

 

I like the Idea of your logo very much. But if you can use some other contrast color instead black for " Beauty Group" it will be better.

 

Try to lose the butterflies, it will not translate in a smaller scale anyway.

 

Just my .2 cents worth, hope it helps ...

 

NameNetwork has made it even better, but I personally think if you mix them both, i.e., add the pink butterflies on the logo that NameNetwork made - that's the best you can do in my opinion. It would look pretty good if you compile both of them.

 

It's ok to have embellishments to a logo as you grow it's size and add color, but as Lanotdesign said you need foundational design elements that translate big, small, color and B&W. I am not saying my quick n dirty design is right by any stretch I was more trying to illustrate how to break it down, introduce balence and simplify.

 

The idea is really nice... But it is! Too simple and abot boring..
You must use some shadows or strokes try to bold a little bit..

 

Could be worse, but also could be better.

 

I really like this version of the logo, there is a lot more balance and it is more pleasing to the eye to look at. In the original version, the word "my" does not stand out as much as it does in NameNetwork's version.

 

I saw your logo its look too much simple you must change the writing style and must use different colour to make it so beautiful .
The butterflies are also needed to be colour .
If you dont mind i suggested to you make it colourful and stylish then look the grace ............