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Please Review My Affiliate Landing Page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by gregdavidson, Jul 11, 2013.

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    I just created a new affiliate landing page. The link is in my signature. Please let me know what you think of it. Are there any changes that you would suggest?
     
    gregdavidson, Jul 11, 2013 IP
  2. BradsFX

    BradsFX Active Member

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    Hey mate!
    I have a me feedback, in footer you haven't changed the copyright,

    I suggest changing that ;)
    The site loads very fast, but looks a bit, "old fasion".
    The site content looks nice and is easy to read, that's about all.
     
    BradsFX, Jul 12, 2013 IP
  3. Michelle Stevens

    Michelle Stevens Member

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    The top half of the page (above the fold) looks nice, uncluttered and clean

    With the bottom half I would suggest breaking the text down into smaller paragraphs because it just makes it easier to read. The paragraphs look a bit "chunky" at the moment
     
    Michelle Stevens, Jul 12, 2013 IP
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    When it comes to Landing Pages I always like to refer back to the highest converting ones you see on Affiliate sites.

    Here's the 2nd highest one sorted by gravity on Clickbank.

    http://tubelaunch.com/

    You have a video already, I would say make it even bigger and more prominent at the top. Then trim down and refine your text content. That's the thing that I always notice about great performing Landing Pages. The font is just ridiculously large. But it also makes it so easy to read. And if the copy is good it will grab you.

    As of right now the paragraphs just kind of meld together and people will get distracted and click away. Always copy from the top performers. Make it easy on yourself!
     
    Chris Santos, Jul 12, 2013 IP
  5. robbydeletter

    robbydeletter Well-Known Member

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    If you want to get people interested in earning money, you should make a video on another location, get a suit and stand up when you talk. A rich man can sell anything because with one look you see that they are succesfull and you want it to.:)
     
    robbydeletter, Jul 12, 2013 IP
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    InternetSpider Greenhorn

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    I agree with robbydeletter
     
    InternetSpider, Jul 13, 2013 IP
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    shymensport Active Member

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    Simple yet professional looking website. robbydeletter is correct you will need it...
     
    shymensport, Jul 15, 2013 IP
  8. adgaro

    adgaro Peon

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    Try to use a green button with an arrow.
     
    adgaro, Jul 15, 2013 IP
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    NameNetwork Active Member

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    Completely agree with Michelle the page and more importantly the information needs to be 'scannable' by the eye to be able to take in the key messages.
     
    NameNetwork, Jul 15, 2013 IP
  10. Nicorici Alin

    Nicorici Alin Greenhorn

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    Try to do something more professional, I'm talking about the graphics. The rest is all good.
     
    Nicorici Alin, Jul 16, 2013 IP