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Review my song please!

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by HaychNines, Jul 9, 2013.

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    HaychNines, Jul 9, 2013 IP
  2. o_iSniPe_xX

    o_iSniPe_xX Well-Known Member

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    #2
    You need to work on your flow. Here is some of my stuff: http://www.youtube.com/user/DimitryProductions
     
    o_iSniPe_xX, Jul 10, 2013 IP
  3. YesThatsMe

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    #3
    also learning about mastering would help you out. the whole thing sounds extremely flat.
     
    YesThatsMe, Jul 30, 2013 IP
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    u rock men,,
     
    ciboy, Aug 3, 2013 IP
  5. piano007

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    i think u are pretty well, just have confidence in urself :)
     
    piano007, Aug 4, 2013 IP
  6. GMWD

    GMWD Peon

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    This is just an ad really.. trying to get more hits to a youtube video. Shouldn't be allowed.
     
    GMWD, Aug 6, 2013 IP
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    tdbuydress Banned

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    o some , keep it up
     
    tdbuydress, Aug 7, 2013 IP
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    good job, you have done well
     
    ABSOFT, Aug 12, 2013 IP
  9. FlyinTurdNugget

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    This stuff is awesomeeeee
     
    FlyinTurdNugget, Aug 12, 2013 IP
  10. Hakuna Matata

    Hakuna Matata Peon

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    Quite cool actually. Like your flow :)
     
    Hakuna Matata, Aug 13, 2013 IP
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    I like it, man. Keep it up!
     
    kaospilot, Aug 13, 2013 IP
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    Sounds good, just have confidence :)
     
    MothLoves, Sep 25, 2013 IP
  13. Jessica Spowart

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    #13
    Has a lot of potential, but your words are not so clear. You have a message that is important to you, and I couldn't make out most of it.
     
    Jessica Spowart, Sep 25, 2013 IP
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    Good job. get more upbeat background music. Song is great need to articulate.
     
    Trebor Keram, Oct 6, 2013 IP