is this article about my site has english grammar problem ? if yes anyone do it for free? this is the link of article
I didn't check out your link but as to what you submitted here: Please replace commas in 1st paragraph with periods. I found your usage of commas irritating and you never want to irritate your readers right?
Hmmm... where to begin... Oh hell... Have you found someone that will rewrite the text for you? If not, I'll do it. However, this is a one time and one time only offer. Please don't make a habit of coming here and asking us to proofread your material and make corrections for you for free.
Make a post in the Content Creation forum here on DP. State that you need a rewrite and ask users to PM you with their rates and examples. https://forums.digitalpoint.com/forums/content-creation.102/ Be aware that if you choose the cheapest rate or a cheap rate, you may not get text much better than what you currently have or worse. You may find someone who will produce quality work at a cheap rate, but you will have to weed through a lot of garbage to find that person.
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thank you for your reply but users can buy or sell products on my site and also my site has VIP membership to avoid fake members which facebook dose not has it . also users can earn money by affiliate networking on my site
Grammatically, it could be worse. Having said that, fairly large bits of it will appear to Google to have been 'spun'. Grammar errors often make a sentence appear spun. For example, the one on the screen - the first error in the sentence is that the word 'include' should be 'including'. As you've been advised, hire a native English speaker to proof read it for you.
After seeing the title of the thread and the content of the post without you including the About Us page, I'm not going to take a second guess that it more than likely has a ton of grammar problems. I'll scan it over anyways and take a look at it. P.S. You're lucky there's some nice people here in the Copywriting forum because no one's going to want to do that massive monstrosity re-write for free. It appears one of the nice posters above actually took the time to correct your About Us page for you but just for a future reference, I believe there's a free tool called Grammarly that can attach to your Microsoft Word or even Firefox browser that'll check grammar for you. I would highly recommend getting Microsoft Word to help with your grammar and if you can't afford that, there's always Open Office (which is a free alternative).