Need some feedback on my copywriting!

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  1. #1
    Hi guys,

    I'd appreciate some suggestions on my copywriting for the website in my signature.

    Thanks in advance :)
     
    clinton, Nov 20, 2012 IP
  2. free_mockups

    free_mockups Active Member

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    It is a good one but you may explain a bit more.May be different clients different explanation.You may have to cover them all!!!
     
    free_mockups, Nov 21, 2012 IP
  3. kavitachoudhary89

    kavitachoudhary89 Peon

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    I agree with mockups. Idea is good, but a bit complicated to understand by a glance.
     
    kavitachoudhary89, Nov 21, 2012 IP
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    I disagree with both of you. The points are sweet and short. Keywords are there, no nonsense chit-chat. I like it. Someone who is looking for just that will find it easy to understand. Ok. that's my view.
     
    joeski_doeski, Nov 21, 2012 IP
  5. clinton

    clinton Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for all the great feedback guys.

    I agree that keeping it sweet and short is good. Too much information drives me nuts. I assume it does the same for my audience.
     
    clinton, Dec 9, 2012 IP