Hi, I have 2 landing Pages for one of my service. Here are both : Business Intelligence Business Intelligence and data warehousing Which one from both Landing Pages is good to attract customers? Also, suggest if anything you feel to add. Thanks in advance.
For me, the second link is really more attractive for visitors. Reason : your first link is a block of text, as a landing page , you need to show directly what can your visitors expect from your site, with the less text possible. The Second link will be more effective i think.
I don't see either page as a proper landing page. You need to work a lot and reduce text content... Coz no one is going to read that much of text, just to get an idea about what you do...
Thanks for your feedback. The service we are promoting needs text/content which is necessary for a company as our services is B2B target. So its not customer where the person will just read a line or so. Let me know if you want anything else to be added on both landing pages. I will be waiting for your further suggestion. Thanks for your feedback. It is really adding value to me. I am targeting people from UK and your reply in same context will be beneficial to me. Second link is actually serving the role of Landing Page while first link is a part of website services.