Review my first art of outsourcing beginner site plz

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    Maschit, Jul 27, 2012 IP
  2. aimforprofit

    aimforprofit Active Member

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    Hi There
    I would start again.
    The fonts and colours are a mess, Too much centred text
    and when I went back for a second look, it did not load.
    Third time it was fine.
    I think you need to get a native English speaking person to check the grammer and text as well.
    Find a site that looks good and copy it, not literally but use it as a guide.
    regards David
     
    aimforprofit, Jul 27, 2012 IP
  3. Online Addict

    Online Addict Greenhorn Affiliate Manager

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    I miss the main selling points(pictures, graphs and videos).
     
    Online Addict, Jul 27, 2012 IP
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    rydorien Active Member

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    very basic site, ok.
     
    rydorien, Jul 28, 2012 IP
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    nexel Member

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    Its a very clean site but its pretty simple you should make it little attractive so that it looks better
     
    nexel, Jul 28, 2012 IP
  6. Maschit

    Maschit Peon

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    #6
    It was a awesome advice and I did take some notice of it
     
    Maschit, Jul 28, 2012 IP
  7. Maschit

    Maschit Peon

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    yeah I think so, I would need to think what other proper thing to add it

    is my first time doing it, so I pretty much less idea to do it.

    awesome advice, thank you
     
    Maschit, Jul 28, 2012 IP
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    nifty5 Peon

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    why so long name?
     
    nifty5, Jul 29, 2012 IP
  9. Slumdog_Millionaire

    Slumdog_Millionaire Member

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    Fonts need to be changed. Keep subtle fonts which are ease on eyes.
     
    Slumdog_Millionaire, Jul 29, 2012 IP
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    that is quite better. but i think you should reconsider about your color adjustment. Try to use 'Bold' format instead of text background color.
     
    newsworldinside, Jul 30, 2012 IP
  11. outsourcethis

    outsourcethis Well-Known Member

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    Whats the point to the site. I guess Im missing it seem basic and ok
     
    outsourcethis, Jul 30, 2012 IP
  12. Maschit

    Maschit Peon

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    #12

    okey thank for the review
     
    Maschit, Jul 31, 2012 IP
  13. Maschit

    Maschit Peon

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    yeah outsourcethis, is my first time ever and I still pretty much of learning, it will be great and i want to tq
     
    Maschit, Jul 31, 2012 IP
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    webmarkets Peon

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    I like the way you have designed it. Its a very clean site but its pretty simple you should make it little attractive so that it looks better
     
    webmarkets, Jul 31, 2012 IP
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    snowboard Peon

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    I like all the benefits clearly laid out - keep it up!
     
    snowboard, Aug 1, 2012 IP
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    jenyfarlopej Member

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    It is very easy on the eyes. I like your colors as well and the whole site is pretty clear and concise.
    The website of the high quantity, have a liking for to go to very quite good.
     
    jenyfarlopej, Aug 1, 2012 IP
  17. mikejackson999

    mikejackson999 Greenhorn

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    #17
    Site should have a nice and related background to make it attractive...
     
    mikejackson999, Aug 2, 2012 IP
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    I think its great... a site ready and made just for digital point members. Now that is really finding a niche.

    everything else about it is terrible
     
    chasdad, Aug 2, 2012 IP
  19. Maschit

    Maschit Peon

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    thank all, I did admit that the layout is so simple but I want to keep it learn how to make it beauty
     
    Maschit, Aug 8, 2012 IP
  20. junepinto

    junepinto Peon

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    #20
    this site word is simple so chenag ....other wise nice site
     
    junepinto, Aug 11, 2012 IP