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Thanks for another revision Agent-X.

-I like your font choice. It reminds me of an EKG and it is pretty cool. I just wish the text had more excitement to it in terms of colors. I'd want some fading or glossiness in it rather than it just being flat.
-The avatars don't really work for me. They look too clip-arty and don't look like they will really look that unique to my site, even though you've dressed them in the style of doctors. It just seems a little too generic.

Thanks!

 

Wow kain, this is really impressive work! It is my wife's favorite so far. Some points:

-The colors of your text seem to be a little off. The red and blue doesn't seem to match the text colors in the original artwork file. Is that so or are my eyes just playing tricks on me?
-One of the avatars is supposed to be wearing scrubs. That was originally the blue avatar but if you have made the blue one wearing the head-mirror and the stethoscope then I would need the other one wearing scrubs rather than a sweater/jacket. You can add a little pocket on the red avatar (similar to this shape) to give the idea of a scrub shirt.
-The red avatar's facemask still needs some work. I think it is just too big. Try making it smaller and look at the shape that it is in on the original artwork file. Try going for that shape rather than a hexagon as that shape is more inline with how a facemask looks.
-The red avatar shouldn't have hair showing in the back if wearing a surgical cap.
-Instead of having the bottom of the bodies curving up so much, could you show me a revision with them more just resting on the surface with a shadow? I appreciate the style you're doing with them but they just seem to curve up too much and look like they're not fully resting on the background.
-Show me a version where the words "med" and "studentz" are of equal thickness. I noticed you made "studentz" thicker and that does look nice but I'd also like to see how it is if they are the same thickness.

Thank you!

 

Hi Agent-X,

-I noticed you made the text look much better in this revision. I like the direction that is headed with the gloss. Is it possible to make the text a little thicker to give it a more bold appearance?
-These icons really don't work for me. They seem like a senior citizen couple and that's not the age group the site caters to. They also don't seem to be wearing any medical professional clothing.

Thanks!

 

Thanks nicholas. Still a strong contender and looks good.

 

Thanks for the feedback Ch i will send the revision soon

 

Hi deedesign, were you still planning on entering?

 

@CH

Thanks for the feedback, Here is the revision, Hope you like it

 

Great revision Kain!

-The face mask still needs to be made a little smaller please. Don't want it to cover that large a portion of the face. The new shape of the mask looks great!
-I like what you did with the bodies bottom curve. Looks much better.
-The text looks wonderful!!
-The scrub shirt is still a bit off the mark. It still looks like a sweater or coat because of the buttons. Please remove the buttons, make the V neck smaller, and have the shirt's pocket be red also but with some alternate color outline on it (similar to the picture I linked to where it shows the stitching of the shirt pocket). We want to make it look like a scrub shirt rather than a sweater or vest.
-Please remove the shirt collar from the blue avatar.
-Please change the skin tone of the avatars to more closely resemble the original artwork. Play with the skin colors and see what looks the best on your design.

Thank you for all the revisions and your hard work. Definitely like what you have come up with!!

 

Again, Thanks for the feedback, here is the revision, Hope you like it

 

Looks wonderful Kain! Thank you!

If you could make one final revision, could you make them so that they are not both the same skin tone. One can be darker than the current tone and the other can remain how it is right now. We want to show that we're open to students from all over the world so want to reflect that in the complexion of the avatars. BTW, your scrub shirt looks wonderful! Top shelf work. Also can you add a little tiny bit more shadow under the red avatar's body. It seems to be a little lacking compared to the blue's shadow.

Everything else is perfect. Looks great!

 

Thanks for the feedback here is a revision

 

@CH, Thanks for your comments

Here is the revision, Hope you like it

 

feedback please

 

Hi andiqu, thanks for joining the contest!

-I really like your text for the first image. Stands out beautifully.
-I need to see the design on my website though -- please update your entry with a version being shown on my website
-I don't like how the stethoscope is hovering over the blue avatar. I want it to just be hanging straight down from the neckline
-The surgery mask and head mirror bands on the two characters shouldn't be completely white. It could have some sort of color there.
-Please try to make the characters' skin tone be different from just white. Want to show some ethnic diversity.

The second version that you attached looks kind of neat also but I prefer your first version more. If you can show me how it will look on the website I can get a better idea if it would work for me. Thanks!

 

Thanks TJB10 for the quick revision. I'm still not sure if this is going to work for me or not but I am thinking it over. Thank you for your entry!

 

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-I like your text, looks fresh, clean and new
-Like the shape of the bodies and how you colored them. Looks very nice.
-Don't like their faces still. Something about it, maybe its the hair? Don't like the hair color on the blue guy and how its showing under the scrub cap...also don't really think I like the red guy's hair. Also red guy needs to have a darker complexion.

Thanks for the revision!

 

Hi DP Designers!

I wanted to first of all thank everyone who participated in this contest. It was a pleasure seeing everyone's creative designs and I really was impressed with the collective talent of the designers on this forum.

I wish I could pay all of you for your efforts but unfortunately I just don't have it in my budget.

I would like to now end this contest and declare the winner to be: logos4all !

Now the only thing is that after my wife and I looked at the other entries, we felt that there was another designer who really made a strong effort and also came up with a wonderful design.

So I'd like to announce another winner also.....kainraziall ! Thank you to both of you for the great designs you've made. If you could please send me your paypal information, I will submit payment ASAP.

When you are sending the files please include all of your previous revisions in one folder and then the final version in another folder. Thank you!

 

File sent! payment received

@Logosforall - Congrats

Thanks
Kain

 

Thanks for selecting my design, payment received files sent and iTrder left

Thanks kainraziall and congrats to you too.