Please check my pages' grammar

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by Adr2310, Feb 15, 2012.

  1. #1
    Hi,
    Hello. I am about to release a new version of my website MyFreeVPN : adrredhe.rd-h.fr/wip/pages. But before it, I need to get rid of my grammar mistakes. Could you please help me with that ? Thank you very much!
     
    Adr2310, Feb 15, 2012 IP
  2. sergiu23

    sergiu23 Greenhorn

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    There are thousands of websites that can do that for free. Btw, get a real website.
     
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  3. Ella_Z.

    Ella_Z. Peon

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    God knows why.

    Try putting this sentence into it:-

    The advice I offer to people with cats are to feed them well.

    It misses the wrong use of 'are' and incorrectly flags 'advice', suggesting 'advise' instead.

    Total sh*tcrock. I'm guessing it's just an installation of that crapulous opensource stuff wordpress are pimping.

    It can't even pick up the obvious error in this:-

    The chips that John eats is not tasty.
     
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  5. Web Outsourcing Gateway

    Web Outsourcing Gateway Member

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  6. contentboss

    contentboss Peon

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    Why? Because it can't even pick up beginner errors like

    The chips that John eats is not tasty.

    or because it's free?

    You get what you pay for.

    In fact, try entering

    You get what's you pay for.

    Presumably YOU can see what is wrong with that sentence. Your 'checker' can't. Pathetic.
     
    contentboss, Feb 20, 2012 IP
  7. Install

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  8. Sam Gilmore

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    Why you think it's awful?
     
    Sam Gilmore, Mar 16, 2012 IP