Do you think this is a good unbiased review for my affiliate product?

this is my review for kyle leon's customized fat loss

 

guys what do you think? is there a way to improve my conversion rate?

 

Lose weight programs are overly saturated. People tend to be wary with some of these programs as they really impact on one's health and well-being..

 

hm so how then do i give people the assurance that it actually works and is authentic?

 

The general niche of diet and weight loss is totally saturated and the people who have been in this niche usually earn the most revenue wise,i would say that you can earn some revenue the fact you us blogger.com does in my mind hinders your progress but of course i could be wrong.You could either carry on using blogger if money is tight but use your own domain or go down the normal route of using your own domain,wordpress script and your own cheap hosting.

This is just my opinion but good luck with it

 

Unbiased review is quite a statement. You see we all have our own opinions and you just gave yours so I guess it's simply ok. On the other hand there is no harm in trying other means if you could. Good Luck.

 

true. k thanks for your opinion. okay i think i should rephrase my question then, do you think it's persuasive enough?

 

yes sir! I already am going to get my own domain through blogger (from godaddy) very soon so yup!