The bevel and lighting on the title font is a little extreme for such narrow characters. The background texture looks too much like carpet or green denim. The dice look good but they are too large compared to the rings. The rings are nice but would be better with two different rings (his and hers.) Thanks for your entry.
My favorite Las Vegas style font for the title is: Las Vegas Fabulous: http://www.fontyukle.net/en/LasVegas-Fabulous.ttf Some other fonts I like: Las Vegas Jackpot: http://www.fontyukle.net/en/LasVegas-Jackpot.ttf Casino Queen: http://www.fontyukle.net/en/Casino+Queen+Normal.ttf I've updated the original post with this info as well.
Forgot to include this in the original post and its not mission critical to include on the cover but the tagline is: Will love overcome fast times and dark secrets?
I really like elements of both these revisions. I think the background of the 1st looks the best with both the stars, circles and sunburst effect. I prefer the fabulous font in the 2nd but a little less italicized and without the red background. I also like the positioning of the rings and dice in the 2nd one but I like the drop shadow effect on these elements in the 1st one. If you can tone down the drop shadow of the dice to closer match the drop shadow of the rings that would look great. Thanks!
This looks great except for the milk grey parts to the left and right sides of the dice. Thanks for your revision. Tough contest.
I really love your revision as well. I think the only thing I would change on this is to bring the title down a little lower. Maybe the tagline looks best in a smaller normal font style? Thanks very much!
Try reducing the size of the rings by 25% while maintaining aspect ratio and the same proximity to the dice. Then lower the title closer to the rings. Can you add some sparkles to some letters like your sparkles on the dice and rings? The red margin at the bottom can go. Thanks for your revisions!
I like the drop shadow style of the title on the 1st revision but I like the drop shadow on the dice and rings in the 2nd, as opposed to the white glow. Awesome entries, thanks!
here is the revision... drop shadow style of the title on the 1st revision..the drop shadow on the dice and rings in the 2nd.. Regards.
The winner is good designer. This is the toughest contest I've had to decide. The level of talent on here is unbelievable and my only regret is that I have to choose one winner. Thanks to each one of you for your participation, patience and revisions.