Please review my 1 page website design - thejourneybegins.co.nr

Discussion in 'Websites' started by ardianet, Sep 7, 2011.

0
  1. #1
    Hi,
    I love to design one page website..
    take a look here : http://thejourneybegins.co.nr/
    because of the page now is only for sample purpose, so i'm using free domain .co.nr

    I guess it's a simple design comparing to all the great designer here on DP.

    let me hear what you're thinking for the page..
    hope you like it. :eek:

    cheers.
     
    ardianet, Sep 7, 2011 IP
  2. mourya

    mourya Active Member

    Messages:
    51
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    93
    #2
    I just visited your blog. May not be the first to visit but definetly the first to write a review.

    honestly , site looks very dirty :( yes i agree with what you said. But it needs a really good change. simply change everything.
     
    mourya, Sep 12, 2011 IP
  3. ardianet

    ardianet Member

    Messages:
    494
    Likes Received:
    3
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #3
    Thank you for your review. :)

    well, I guess it's not a blog, I rather said that was a mini-site...
    could you please describe to me the meaning of 'dirty' ?? , so I could build more 'cleaner' site in the future .. :)

    and.. any ideas/suggestions on what should I need to add for this kind of site ? :)
     
    ardianet, Sep 13, 2011 IP
  4. sam_5

    sam_5 Peon

    Messages:
    28
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #4
    good job .keep it up
     
    sam_5, Sep 16, 2011 IP
  5. collacor

    collacor Peon

    Messages:
    9
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #5
    Really nice website design than my own :D
     
    collacor, Sep 18, 2011 IP
  6. Moctezuma

    Moctezuma Peon

    Messages:
    69
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #6
    I like that you have a style going on already, but you should ad more art of the band, like photos videos and some samples of what they play.
     
    Moctezuma, Sep 18, 2011 IP
  7. aliraza9

    aliraza9 Peon

    Messages:
    117
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #7
    i didnt like your site..site should be neat and tidy
     
    aliraza9, Sep 19, 2011 IP
  8. ardianet

    ardianet Member

    Messages:
    494
    Likes Received:
    3
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #8
    Thanks :D
    I'll be happy to see yours.. what's the URL ?
    in the previous web of the band I did add some photos & sample of the music that they played.
    my aim for this web is to make the website only have ONE page, try to minimize using of scrollbar, and made it as simple as it can be but still holding all information needed.
    I guess adding an image rotator & a music player will be great. Thanks for the suggestion. :cool:
    could you describe more about the neat and tidy ? is it the layout, the code, or the appearance(design) ? thanks. :)
     
    ardianet, Sep 19, 2011 IP
  9. Leadsandlists

    Leadsandlists Peon

    Messages:
    50
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #9
    Make more pages and links to those pages so I can be on your site longer than 2 seconds and see the whole thing.
     
    Leadsandlists, Sep 20, 2011 IP
  10. ed_gallois

    ed_gallois Peon

    Messages:
    24
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #10
    Cool enough site. You need to get your English proof-read though if you are appealing to an English audience. You wrote:

    "Our band was formed in 2006. We are neighbor since we were born. One day, the band idea pop-up just like that. And before we know what hit us, we already jamming in a freakin-cheap studio playing BLITZKRIEG POP and our 1st made song DOWNTOWN in JAKARTA."

    It should read:

    "Our band was formed in 2006. We have been neighbors since the day we were born. One day the idea for a band popped up...just like that! And before we knew what hit us, we were already jamming in a freakin cheap studio playing BLITZKRIEG POP and had made our 1st song DOWNTOWN in JAKARTA."
     
    ed_gallois, Sep 21, 2011 IP