Please Review My Blog

I'm just started blogging. Until now I have written 6 articles, I know should I write more articles, I'm on my way to it. But I need reviews from all of you, whether my blog need some improvement on:

- The template
- Article content
- English Grammar (English is not my language)
- Affiliate Links
- Banner placement
- etc.

My goal is to monetize my blog. So please tell me what to do next beside adding more articles?

The blog address is http://power-within.com

If you have any advices, please suggest me. I would highly appreciate

Thanks in advance

 

Looks quite good.

I find it a little difficult to read though. I don't know why most themes have that color and size text. I always change it to black text and make it a little bigger so it's easier on the eye. Also don't like how the summarized text is italicised. I would tweak the theme to change these points.

 

Looks good to me.
Good work with good affords. Keep it up dear.

 

I dont like it but its clean and nice babe

 

Looking good, but try to use Google ads below the title post for better results.

 

Okay, I changed the themes now.

Which one you don't like?

I installed new themes and it's already have google ads on it. But not related to the content. What do you think?

 

Looks Like A Nice Peace ......

 

Work on keywords, its the best thing to show the quality ads on your blog.

 

The theme and layout looks professional. I would suggest you get Adsense on the sidebar. I find them less intrusive and they tend to be ads related to your blog's content. There are some grammatical errors in the articles. You might want to go over your articles first before hitting Publish.

Hope that helps. Have a good day!

 

The theme is looking good and professional , but in my opinion you must have an Image logo instead of Text logo .

 

Looks ok, Get some social network buttons in there.

 

Nice blog, simple theme with good article

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Honestly, it took me much to long to figure out what the blog is about. you need a tag line, an about page, and much more descriptive titles.

 

I feel like the title could use a little work (it's more of a phrase below your actual header).
Why use a RSS icon as your favicon?
From there, the only noticeable thing is grammar (not quite so basic).

 

Well, okay, It seems I'm not clear enough about my blog. Thanks for your advice.

I just downloaded the templates, and I don't even know the use of RSS . Maybe I should find better templates. Anyone can advise what kind of template that fit my blog?
For grammar, please advise should I use more simple grammar or improve my english?

 

Bro - its fine - the theme is targeted - just post content daily and move on bro - be DONE WITH THIS ISSUE

 

Thanks bro

 

I like your blog,,good also.

 

it is normal

 

You have to write about 20 articles and update them regularly to submit your blog into google adsense