Contest $30 paypal for new business card design

Hello,

I am looking for a new or updated business card design for my travel agency. I've had my current card for a number of years and I would like something different for our 10th Anniversary. The current card design is:

The current design is okay but the contact info needs updated and overall card needs freshened up a bit. I would also like to change the tag line from "Let our experience help plan yours" to "The internet is for LOOKING, your travel agent is for BOOKING!"

Let's see what you can come up with. Feedback will be provided.

 

Wait for my entry please.

 

heres my try, feedback would be appreciated.
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Thanks for the entry. Not really what I am looking for. People want color and excitement when thinking about their vacations and the blue sky and airplane doesn't really invoke that. Thanks again.

 

Thanks. The colors seem a bit muted. Was that intentional for watermarking your design or is this the color scheme you were trying for?

 

My try:

 

Is this contest still open?

 

Yes. I am still hoping to find a new card design. I will close it on Tuesday 5/24 to give people some time to get thier designs in. Thanks for asking.

 

Could I have feedback on mine?

 

Thanks to everyone who submitted a design idea. Sorry but I've been offline and unable to post individual feedback. I am closing this contest as I really didn't get any designs that wow'ed me. They were some nice business cards but did not really reflect the fun and travel aspect of our industry. Thanks again!