Wel, finally i've decie to create a blog on blogspot. THis blog is all about love, dating, health, lifestyle, etc! Still the description is not decided!!! Well, the title of the blog is i Love Messages
The blog looks great, but I recommend not being quite so stiff with some of your blog posts. The 'split ends' post feels like reading a dictionary, almost.
Exactly, i've been trying to put some pictures. But i cant find any. Actually, i'm searching for some free pictures which i can put in my blog without linking back to the source of the picture (out links will dilute the strength of my new blog)
I'm sorry, I didn't mean for it to sound insulting-- I just mean that there's no personality to it. Take your opening line, for instance: Split ends are caused by many hair care and hair styling products that we generally use such as hair dryers, hair dyes, hair straitening and curling, hair extension, or even scratchy and rough bedclothes, hands & fingers. Since your blog theme is informal (dating, beauty tips, etc) you would reach your readers better if you made your posts a little more personal. Open with a short story ('On the morning of my big speech, I woke up, looked in the mirror and found that my hair was full of split ends!') a hook ("Have you ever wondered why the ends of your hair sometimes become frayed?") or just a snappy opening line ("They're the bane of our hair's existence" --okay, a little extreme, lol). Then you can get into telling your audience what they are and what causes them. Also, spell check your posts. Straightening is spelled with a gh.
@Aelle I must say that you are a great writer..! Your writing skill is really good...kinda funny and entertaining I wish I've writing skills like you Well, i wrote all those post by myself and now, you know, my writing skill is not good... I've no other choice I cant outsource now 'cus i don't have a CC Anyways, I've updated the design again what do you say about the new design?? Thank you a lot for the review