Please give me a valuable suggestions

I create a new website http://musicblogtips.com give me your suggestions to improve it. Which contents are better to write. Any other suggestions. Give your strong comments. Thanks.

 

The first thing I will suggest is a new layout for this web site. Correct a lot of HTML errors if you do keep the same layout.

 

Take off the image on top of your introduction paragraph. It takes away from your SEO effectiveness. Also, Your paragraph starts passively. You need to grab your website visitors with eye catching interetsing phrases. It begins as if I am about to read a history book! Good luck.

 

Get a nice layout at least download free wordpress theme.This layout is terrible and not nice.I just tell my opinion.

 

i too thinking so. Thanks i am going to download new wordpress theme

thanks i try to do that.

 

Your primary focus seems to be Music.. however you have content related to health, jobs etc... if you want to succeed in ranking, i suggest you focus on one category. It is not easy to keep up with competition, especially when attempting to handle such a variety of content.

design is simple but nice. Good luck!

 

You need a lot of work on Style/Layout.

 

simple website, you need some job to make it a great one.

 

thanks a lot your advice realy good. I will try.

 

You need some original work displayed on your site, stuff you are passionate about

 

Hey Suryarock,
The blog looks alright for a start but there's a bit of things that could be worked on.
From the visual side it does seem to look a bit chaotic. When you enter the main page you dont really know whats going on. You see two navigations, some pictures and text interwoven with some google ads. You could try to at least adjust things more to make it look eye catching.

Regarding the content, you should focus on one topic and provide solid content for it instead of spreading yout concentration onto different topics. It is a good idea to focus a blog on one thing, then perhaps make a new blog about another thing and when you have two or more of them at a resonable level with good content - link them to each other.

No hard feelings I hope Just my (constructive I hope) opinion. Best of luck with your site!

 

@kavalorn thanks buddy so i decided to change the theme. I am new so dnt know much. I will try thanks for advice.

Hey friends so i decide to change the templete to wordpress theme .So i created my 15 pages in my website. Can i copy these page contents into my new wordpress theme. Can i create pages as like www.Mydomain.com/page.html in wordpress theme i copy old website contents into a wordpress. Plz help me friends.

 

i think need exchange links with similar blogs/sites to get some good results in SE.

 

Your page should contain unique and value contents and not flashy templates or images. Avoid any of that and concentrate on contents. End of day Google doesn’t really bother about your site design but the content on it.

 

i think that the design is great but i also think that it doesn't look very much professional for a music web. the last one, content is good though

 

You have good site, but i think left side space for google ads is not perfect..

 

new template, categories up top need to be fixed too

 

This kind of template design is abit old.
-The background is boring
-The intro. image is so.... no comment.
- There are many things missing, I don't know what, but It doesn't catch my attention at all.

You know when you visit a website which is parked for selling, your page reminded me like those auction pages.

Just my opinion, no offence

 

you must improve your template.

 

thanks you share your opinion its help me do change. Anyway i try to use wordpress.